The Wake Of 911
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Comment from CrystieCookie999
The five stars are really for the line, "They plot and pray, day after day" because that seems to be such an essential description of religious jihadists, if you boil it down to its most active element. I was puzzled but pleased by the phrase "the market has stolen our purse." It seemed like an odd way to say that capitalism, perhaps, has taken away what is really valuable to us individually speaking.
The five stars are really for the line, "They plot and pray, day after day" because that seems to be such an essential description of religious jihadists, if you boil it down to its most active element. I was puzzled but pleased by the phrase "the market has stolen our purse." It seemed like an odd way to say that capitalism, perhaps, has taken away what is really valuable to us individually speaking.
Comment Written 16-Jul-2019
Comment from Gail Denham
It seems as if the services have shown greater diligence in stopping terrorist plots - by various ways. I certainly hope so. In many ways, this country has been naive - there simply are people in this world who hate us. We lived in Taiwan for two years (husband was army) and they did not like us there.
We're envied and hated - but the muslim god is extremely dangerous I believe.
Good poem
It seems as if the services have shown greater diligence in stopping terrorist plots - by various ways. I certainly hope so. In many ways, this country has been naive - there simply are people in this world who hate us. We lived in Taiwan for two years (husband was army) and they did not like us there.
We're envied and hated - but the muslim god is extremely dangerous I believe.
Good poem
Comment Written 15-Jul-2019
Comment from Neonewman
I'll never forget that day and where I was at the time. This piece is well crafted and I hope it reaches many readers. Thank you for sharing your talent.
God bless
Steve
I'll never forget that day and where I was at the time. This piece is well crafted and I hope it reaches many readers. Thank you for sharing your talent.
God bless
Steve
Comment Written 15-Jul-2019
Comment from Eve Vasa
Hi, I enjoyed reading about your thoughts in this poem. I believe going into Iraq was a huge error, but it's too late now. I also think we need to look inward to find out why these people hate us so much, and until we do that, we won't really 'get it'. People in third world countries can only take so much, and there has never been an empire that didn't fall. A lot from within and we are seeing that now in mho. America is in trouble morally and that's the most dangerous erosion of all. We are too busy spending and spending to think about others. And to look after the world's poor means we in first world countries need to think 'less', not 'more'. I would gladly pay a tax to build these countries infrastructure so they are not wanting to leave their homes in search of a better life. And so they become trading partners rather potential enemies. I believe multiculturalism doesn't work, we've had enough time to see this, but alas, 'common sense' is a most uncommon virtue.
I liked that your poem wasn't overworked and pedantic, but rather, heart felt and questioning. Simple is the essence of style. You can have too many poetic devices, just the same as you can be wearing too many accessories.
Nice job with this and thanks for sharing your thoughts.
reply by Eve Vasa on 15-Jul-2019
Hi, I enjoyed reading about your thoughts in this poem. I believe going into Iraq was a huge error, but it's too late now. I also think we need to look inward to find out why these people hate us so much, and until we do that, we won't really 'get it'. People in third world countries can only take so much, and there has never been an empire that didn't fall. A lot from within and we are seeing that now in mho. America is in trouble morally and that's the most dangerous erosion of all. We are too busy spending and spending to think about others. And to look after the world's poor means we in first world countries need to think 'less', not 'more'. I would gladly pay a tax to build these countries infrastructure so they are not wanting to leave their homes in search of a better life. And so they become trading partners rather potential enemies. I believe multiculturalism doesn't work, we've had enough time to see this, but alas, 'common sense' is a most uncommon virtue.
I liked that your poem wasn't overworked and pedantic, but rather, heart felt and questioning. Simple is the essence of style. You can have too many poetic devices, just the same as you can be wearing too many accessories.
Nice job with this and thanks for sharing your thoughts.
Comment Written 15-Jul-2019
reply by Eve Vasa on 15-Jul-2019
Comment from Mastery
Hello, Jay. Your poem poses a very interesting question when all is said and done. I cannot help but think back to when our entire world changed the way it did. what with terrorism, Jihd and anything else with hatred attached to it in some way. Of course we should not have gone into Iraq in my opinion. Bless you, my friend. Bob
Hello, Jay. Your poem poses a very interesting question when all is said and done. I cannot help but think back to when our entire world changed the way it did. what with terrorism, Jihd and anything else with hatred attached to it in some way. Of course we should not have gone into Iraq in my opinion. Bless you, my friend. Bob
Comment Written 15-Jul-2019
Comment from Lobber
The horrors of the world are many. . . Many long ago and long forgotten. We contemplate action vs no action. Man is the one animal capable of dithering. - Lobber
The horrors of the world are many. . . Many long ago and long forgotten. We contemplate action vs no action. Man is the one animal capable of dithering. - Lobber
Comment Written 15-Jul-2019
Comment from kahpot
I agree they do hail a very different God, one that breathes a Satan's breath, if one can believe his demise deserves many others, he must be found and his arrogance snuffed, I like this read and poem very much, it stirs, very well done****kahpot
I agree they do hail a very different God, one that breathes a Satan's breath, if one can believe his demise deserves many others, he must be found and his arrogance snuffed, I like this read and poem very much, it stirs, very well done****kahpot
Comment Written 15-Jul-2019
Comment from A. Willow Bends
Well, this is quite well done and you were correct in wondering if we should have gone into Iraq. I think we got a bit ahead of ourselves on that decision. Your poetry is not just poetic. It is informative, thought provoking, educational and informative. We can learn much from it.
Great job with this one!
Wendy
Well, this is quite well done and you were correct in wondering if we should have gone into Iraq. I think we got a bit ahead of ourselves on that decision. Your poetry is not just poetic. It is informative, thought provoking, educational and informative. We can learn much from it.
Great job with this one!
Wendy
Comment Written 15-Jul-2019
Comment from l.raven
HI Jay, as much as I hate war...you can't just sit back...and wait for their return...you have to let them know what you did was wrong...never again...and still...it doesn't stop...sigh...very well written my friend...my heart goes out to all who died in 911...and those who are still suffering for it...love your poem...love Linda xxoo
HI Jay, as much as I hate war...you can't just sit back...and wait for their return...you have to let them know what you did was wrong...never again...and still...it doesn't stop...sigh...very well written my friend...my heart goes out to all who died in 911...and those who are still suffering for it...love your poem...love Linda xxoo
Comment Written 14-Jul-2019
Comment from Lance S. Loria
I really enjoyed reading your work. It kept me engaged from beginning to finish. Thank you for sharing. No edits or adjustments necessary.
I really enjoyed reading your work. It kept me engaged from beginning to finish. Thank you for sharing. No edits or adjustments necessary.
Comment Written 14-Jul-2019