Scene at a Hypnotist Act Part 3
Pons and Ned still on stage at the hypnotiist show13 total reviews
Comment from artisart4u
Your story is very nice to read about being hypnotize.
Above your title you have two "i's" in hypnotist.
Being hypnotize, seems like it is a scary thing to do.
Your different colors you used for each character and well as the words you wrote to tell what was going on in the scene.
Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2019
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Your story is very nice to read about being hypnotize.
Above your title you have two "i's" in hypnotist.
Being hypnotize, seems like it is a scary thing to do.
Your different colors you used for each character and well as the words you wrote to tell what was going on in the scene.
Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 04-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2019
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Thanks, AIA.
Comment from w.j.debi
I didn't catch the earlier sections of your script, but this sounds like it's a show within a show with a hypnotist providing entertainment. It is easy to visualize what is happening and how the actors should play out the scene. Great job with the dialect for Ned.
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2019
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I didn't catch the earlier sections of your script, but this sounds like it's a show within a show with a hypnotist providing entertainment. It is easy to visualize what is happening and how the actors should play out the scene. Great job with the dialect for Ned.
Comment Written 03-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2019
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Thanks, w.j.
Comment from WryWriter
This story gave me a chuckle. Just the right amount of believable theatrics by the characters. Pons playing Ned very amusing. Great job on this!
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2019
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This story gave me a chuckle. Just the right amount of believable theatrics by the characters. Pons playing Ned very amusing. Great job on this!
Comment Written 03-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2019
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Thanks, WW
Comment from CrystieCookie999
Pretty humorous. I have only seen a hypnotist live once. I don't know if young people know classic cartoons anymore. They could still remember classic super-heroes, though. It definitely made me think of Bugs Bunny, though! Not sure what to improve on.
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2019
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Pretty humorous. I have only seen a hypnotist live once. I don't know if young people know classic cartoons anymore. They could still remember classic super-heroes, though. It definitely made me think of Bugs Bunny, though! Not sure what to improve on.
Comment Written 02-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2019
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Thanks, CC
Comment from Earl Corp
That was a very creative hypnotism act. I didn't realize Ned and Pons were interchangeable like that. I liked the Bugs Bunny piece to it. Very nice job.
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2019
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That was a very creative hypnotism act. I didn't realize Ned and Pons were interchangeable like that. I liked the Bugs Bunny piece to it. Very nice job.
Comment Written 16-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2019
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Thanks, Earl
Comment from Sylvia Page
Thanks, Bill, this script today is hilarious. I am still laughing my sides out. Your talent is great and your humour is out of this world. I can still picture Pons using his shoes as a microphone while holding the other thinking it is a cat. Great imagery too.
Best,
Sylvia
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2019
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Thanks, Bill, this script today is hilarious. I am still laughing my sides out. Your talent is great and your humour is out of this world. I can still picture Pons using his shoes as a microphone while holding the other thinking it is a cat. Great imagery too.
Best,
Sylvia
Comment Written 16-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2019
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Thank you, Sylvia, for the great review. Bill
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Comment from AdaJulie
Such a captivating write. You are are awesome! Such a great talent and so fun for you to share your talent with the world! Great job on sharing your gift
reply by the author on 15-Jul-2019
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Such a captivating write. You are are awesome! Such a great talent and so fun for you to share your talent with the world! Great job on sharing your gift
Comment Written 15-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 15-Jul-2019
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You are so kind, Ada
Comment from Y. M. Roger
Hooray! An end to the madness...LOL! :) ;) Oh, and Pons does a pretty good Ned, don't cha think? :) ;) Thanx for sharing the whole ordeal with us, Sir Bill! ;) ;) Yvette
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2019
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Hooray! An end to the madness...LOL! :) ;) Oh, and Pons does a pretty good Ned, don't cha think? :) ;) Thanx for sharing the whole ordeal with us, Sir Bill! ;) ;) Yvette
Comment Written 14-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2019
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Thanks, Yvette.
Comment from djsaxon
Hilarious as always, and refreshing. I have been wading through wrapped rhyme, spiritual poems, and rispetti. (Ned would possibly call them risotto). Like the Bugs Bunny underpin - DJ
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2019
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Hilarious as always, and refreshing. I have been wading through wrapped rhyme, spiritual poems, and rispetti. (Ned would possibly call them risotto). Like the Bugs Bunny underpin - DJ
Comment Written 14-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2019
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Thanks, DJ, for the positive review. Bill
Comment from nomi338
The six stars are fro keeping things straight and keeping it entertaining. This was not an easy thing to do I am sure. You are getting pretty good at this stuff.
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2019
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The six stars are fro keeping things straight and keeping it entertaining. This was not an easy thing to do I am sure. You are getting pretty good at this stuff.
Comment Written 13-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2019
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Thank you, nomi, for the terrific review. Bill
