I Turn the Earth
Rondeau23 total reviews
Comment from Gloria ....
I just love your table setting. Green and white such pleasing colours that really accentuate the tigers lilies. Oh yeah, the rondeau. --magnificent and you see these are the kinds of poets and photographs I can see people just loving to read.
Superb metre and rhyme and the floral "oh" is a most creative expression.
Many thanks for sharing such beauty.
Gloria
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2019
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I just love your table setting. Green and white such pleasing colours that really accentuate the tigers lilies. Oh yeah, the rondeau. --magnificent and you see these are the kinds of poets and photographs I can see people just loving to read.
Superb metre and rhyme and the floral "oh" is a most creative expression.
Many thanks for sharing such beauty.
Gloria
Comment Written 12-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2019
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Hello Gloria. I love the way you structured your review. Fun!! Thanks for the wonderful comments.
Melissa
Comment from Janetsue
You've created a beautiful centerpiece with flowers from your own garden. The rondeau poem is lovely, as well, and I enjoyed reading it very much. (I think the petals of day lilies are edible as well.)
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2019
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You've created a beautiful centerpiece with flowers from your own garden. The rondeau poem is lovely, as well, and I enjoyed reading it very much. (I think the petals of day lilies are edible as well.)
Comment Written 12-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2019
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Thank you, Spangle, for the wonderful review and comments.
Melissa
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You're very welcome, Melissa!
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
You most definitely have green fingers Melissa! I loved your Rondeau about you turning the earth and your endeavours have brought fruit as your picture looks amazing, cosy and welcoming. Your centre piece looks natural and I see the greenery extends to the plates too! Who needs food! I enjoyed your write, a perfectly formed Rondeau, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2019
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You most definitely have green fingers Melissa! I loved your Rondeau about you turning the earth and your endeavours have brought fruit as your picture looks amazing, cosy and welcoming. Your centre piece looks natural and I see the greenery extends to the plates too! Who needs food! I enjoyed your write, a perfectly formed Rondeau, love Dolly x
Comment Written 12-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2019
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Hi Dolly. Thank you very much for your heartwarming words. I do like to grow flowers and bring them in to the house. I am delighted you like the poem and the centerpiece!!
Melissa
Comment from Ulla
Hi Melissa, I've just written you a review as to your lovely flowers and then I lost it all. Well, what I wanted to say is that I liked it a lot. I would love to see your garden. All best. Ulla:)))
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2019
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Hi Melissa, I've just written you a review as to your lovely flowers and then I lost it all. Well, what I wanted to say is that I liked it a lot. I would love to see your garden. All best. Ulla:)))
Comment Written 12-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2019
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Thanks so much, dear Ulla. I truly appreciate you reviewing this piece.
Melissa
Comment from lyenochka
Wow! What a beautiful arrangement, Melissa! Thanks for sharing the flowers, the work of your hands and the lovely rondeau poem and for remembering my badgering you about seeing your gardening expertise. I like your "floral oh!"
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2019
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Wow! What a beautiful arrangement, Melissa! Thanks for sharing the flowers, the work of your hands and the lovely rondeau poem and for remembering my badgering you about seeing your gardening expertise. I like your "floral oh!"
Comment Written 12-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2019
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Hey there, Helen!!! I am glad you got to catch this poem. I remember you asking about my flowers and thought I would share with you. Thanks bunches for always supporting me!! Hugs.
Melissa
Comment from Sally Law
I'll be right there as soon as I fire up my Learjet. What a gorgeous display and spray of flowers from your garden! A lovely verse and photo. I adore flower and decorating with them, too.
Sending you my best today as always,
Sally xo
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2019
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I'll be right there as soon as I fire up my Learjet. What a gorgeous display and spray of flowers from your garden! A lovely verse and photo. I adore flower and decorating with them, too.
Sending you my best today as always,
Sally xo
Comment Written 12-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2019
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Hello Sal. Thank you for your wonderful review. I wish you could come for dinner and share some R&R here with us. I am glad you liked this Rondeau.
Melissa
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Gorgeous centerpiece
and lovely table setting.
-This looks like some
fine dining.
-I appreciate your note, Melissa,
and picked up on the reference
to Helen and her plants.
-A nicely written poem
about how you love
gardening and the results
you can share in and
around your home.
-Thanks for sharing,
and enjoy your flowers and dinner!
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2019
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-Gorgeous centerpiece
and lovely table setting.
-This looks like some
fine dining.
-I appreciate your note, Melissa,
and picked up on the reference
to Helen and her plants.
-A nicely written poem
about how you love
gardening and the results
you can share in and
around your home.
-Thanks for sharing,
and enjoy your flowers and dinner!
Comment Written 12-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2019
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Hi Pam. I am so glad you enjoyed this verse. I love to garden and enjoy getting out in it and puttering around. Thank you.
Melissa
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You are very welcome, Melissa. Gardening and I are not compatible at all; I can't grow anything!
Comment from kahpot
What a gorgeous arrangement your artwork is displaying, yes planting flowers from the very start is rewarding, and the place and final showing, this is a wonderful Rondeau, very well written****kahpot
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2019
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What a gorgeous arrangement your artwork is displaying, yes planting flowers from the very start is rewarding, and the place and final showing, this is a wonderful Rondeau, very well written****kahpot
Comment Written 12-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2019
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Hi there!! I am delighted that you liked this one and hope you have days filled with lovely flowers too. Thank you for the lovely review!!!
Melissa
Comment from Mistydawn
Your flowers are gorgeous. Wish I could do that, but all I seem to grow is thick hardy weeds. I did grow potatoes once but they were so small that it took my entire crop to make one meal.
Your poem is well-written, interesting. Your great description makes gardening seem like so much fun.
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2019
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Your flowers are gorgeous. Wish I could do that, but all I seem to grow is thick hardy weeds. I did grow potatoes once but they were so small that it took my entire crop to make one meal.
Your poem is well-written, interesting. Your great description makes gardening seem like so much fun.
Comment Written 12-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2019
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Thank you very much, Misty. I do love puttering out there and now that the flowers are coming in, well, it makes my heart happy. I really appreciate your wonderful review.
Melissa
Comment from poetwatch
Melissa, I like your Rondeau, but you're lacking one more line. :) how about, "for blossoms putting on a show, unveil truth that you should know" :) I know you used know already, but this was on short notice. :) Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2019
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Melissa, I like your Rondeau, but you're lacking one more line. :) how about, "for blossoms putting on a show, unveil truth that you should know" :) I know you used know already, but this was on short notice. :) Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 12-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2019
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Thank you so much!!! I had not realized I was a line short. I fixed it, thanks to you!! I really appreciate it, Jose!!
Melissa
