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Scarecrow

Where there's a will

8 total reviews 
Comment from lyenochka
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Lol! What a good sport you were at such a tender age to come through and fill the part of the scarecrow for the show! Enjoyed your fun poem. I think you should try ballet again. Or yoga?

 Comment Written 19-Jul-2019


reply by the author on 19-Jul-2019
    Lyenochka, you are too cute! Since both knees need replacing I doubt seriously I will try either, but thanks for your comments. They are much appreciated.
    Katharine - pome lover
Comment from Y. M. Roger
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This is just a delightful poem, Katharine -- and a very original and unique offering for the Dance contest! :) I love that, more than anything, that you hung in there and 'nailed' the part you were given.... and, wanna know something? I auditioned for the ampitheater production of the Wizard of Oz when I was in high school (Senior year, I think) and I wasn't a trained 'singer' but apparently I was animated enough that I got the one part that didn't have to sing.... the Wicked Witch!!! ;) ;) LOL!! ;) ;) Thanx for sharing and best of luck at the polls! ;) Yvette

 Comment Written 13-Jul-2019


reply by the author on 13-Jul-2019
    that made me laugh! We'd have been quite a pair!
    Thanks for your neat comments. I bet the witch part was fun.
    still smilin'!
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
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A very well-written poem about a wish that was not possible to come true, but when there is a will to keep trying there will be a way to find even if it means we have to be the scarecrow.

 Comment Written 12-Jul-2019


reply by the author on 12-Jul-2019
    thank you, and thank heavens there was no photo.
    Katharine
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
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What a fun memory to look back on now and hopefully smile. I enjoyed reading your poem, You did a great job, PomeLover. I like the smooth flow of lines, the great rhymes, the story told, the great picture, and the overall presentation. Thanks for sharing and best wishes. Jan

 Comment Written 12-Jul-2019


reply by the author on 12-Jul-2019
    Thanks, Jan. I really appreciate that!
    Katharine - pome lover
Comment from judiverse
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One of the great nieces has tried all kinds of dance, even ballet. When they did their exhibition, there were some overweight girls (sisters) in the show, and they did very well. The performed for a few years, but didn't seem to lose any weight. If you were a "beanpole" you were fortunate, as you were bound to fill out. The dance classes were a great experience for you, and it's an honor to have any part, even that of the scarecrow. That made a great ending for your poem. Very enjoyable, and great rhyme and flow. All the best! judi

 Comment Written 12-Jul-2019


reply by the author on 12-Jul-2019
    thanks, Judi. Everybody in the class had a part, but you're right, I could have been a tall, clumsy Munchkin.
    Thanks for the good wishes, too.
    Katharine
reply by judiverse on 12-Jul-2019
    You're welcome. This made a delightful poem and I'm sure you were outstanding in the role. judi
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2019
    :)
reply by judiverse on 13-Jul-2019
    You're welcome. judi
Comment from Mystic Angel 7777
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This is a wonderful entry! Woohoo two in row now that are NOT abut romance, instead you chose an autobiographical approach filled with a touch of humor about your days as a ballerina. Innovative and clever! Good luck in the voting and thank you for sharing it.

 Comment Written 12-Jul-2019


reply by the author on 12-Jul-2019
    thanks a lot. Nope, not a smidge of romance, just awkward effort.
    Thanks for the good wishes!
    pome lover
Comment from Roxanna Andrews
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Well you hung in there and did you best. I wouldn't even have tried. I have no rhythm or grace. This is a very well done and fun poem. I saw no errors and it told a fun story. Hope you do well in the contest. Rox

 Comment Written 12-Jul-2019


reply by the author on 12-Jul-2019
    thanks so much. I appreciate that.
    Katharine - pome lover
Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
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I love it, I assume it is true. Love the story line and the ending, reminds me of the dance I did for school, heavy set girl trying to twist, but I made it work,. LOL

 Comment Written 12-Jul-2019


reply by the author on 12-Jul-2019
    thanks. yep, unfortunately, it's true. Have to admit, though, it was fun - and funny!