Bathroom Break
When friendship goes down the toilet2 total reviews
Comment from jenintorre
I really enjoyed reading this flash fi tion story. It has a very good unexpected ending which is what counts. I wish you lots of luck in the competition. Best wishes. Jen
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2019
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I really enjoyed reading this flash fi tion story. It has a very good unexpected ending which is what counts. I wish you lots of luck in the competition. Best wishes. Jen
Comment Written 12-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2019
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Thank you for reading the piece I am so glad you liked it.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This sounds a bit like a kidnap situation and she manages to escape through the window to freedom, a kind of chilling write that ended well, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2019
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This sounds a bit like a kidnap situation and she manages to escape through the window to freedom, a kind of chilling write that ended well, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 12-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2019
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Now that you've said something I agree it does sound like a kidnapping of sorts. I didn't even think of that when I was writing it.
I love that you found it somewhat chilling.
