God Omnipotent Deeds
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Comment from Sylvia Page
Alcreator Litt Dear, This is a nice bit of advice and explanation on waste and the value of water we waste so freely. Well done.
This these two sentences would read better in this manner...
But, father, why (was) this disaster caused upon at our land overnight?"
"God teaches us (the) value of life the way He likes.
Best,
Sylvia
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Alcreator Litt Dear, This is a nice bit of advice and explanation on waste and the value of water we waste so freely. Well done.
This these two sentences would read better in this manner...
But, father, why (was) this disaster caused upon at our land overnight?"
"God teaches us (the) value of life the way He likes.
Best,
Sylvia
Comment Written 15-Jul-2019
Comment from Tpa
I admire your writings. Your stories propose a good life lesson in establishing one 'walk-in life' I salute your talent and the magnificent gift you share with others.
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I admire your writings. Your stories propose a good life lesson in establishing one 'walk-in life' I salute your talent and the magnificent gift you share with others.
Comment Written 14-Jul-2019
Comment from Lobber
Sometimes one has to work, suffer nd struggle to really appreciate gifts that are given to us. These gifts are reminders of the world's grandeur - Lobber
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Sometimes one has to work, suffer nd struggle to really appreciate gifts that are given to us. These gifts are reminders of the world's grandeur - Lobber
Comment Written 14-Jul-2019
Comment from Ross E Silke
Excellent and well-enjoyed! I really appreciate your thoughts and clarity in this writing piece. Good train of thought. An inspiring piece! Well written and compact, tightened, and polished. Inviting. Best,
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Excellent and well-enjoyed! I really appreciate your thoughts and clarity in this writing piece. Good train of thought. An inspiring piece! Well written and compact, tightened, and polished. Inviting. Best,
Comment Written 13-Jul-2019
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
We do waste so much water, and food. I learnt to be frugal with water when I lived in the south of Spain where there is a severe lack of it. We throw out a terrible amount of food, when people elsewhere are starving. It wouldn't take much to ration our needs so the world could survive. Well done, this lesson was well written and a good one to share. :)) Sandra xx
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We do waste so much water, and food. I learnt to be frugal with water when I lived in the south of Spain where there is a severe lack of it. We throw out a terrible amount of food, when people elsewhere are starving. It wouldn't take much to ration our needs so the world could survive. Well done, this lesson was well written and a good one to share. :)) Sandra xx
Comment Written 13-Jul-2019
Comment from Aussie
Most enjoyable tale from the Bible. If everyone was frugal, there would be food and nourishment for all mankind. There should be no third world starvation, as god said, "all men are created equal." And still the rich get richer and the poor get poorer. Thanks for sharing.
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Most enjoyable tale from the Bible. If everyone was frugal, there would be food and nourishment for all mankind. There should be no third world starvation, as god said, "all men are created equal." And still the rich get richer and the poor get poorer. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 13-Jul-2019
Comment from QC Poet
Amen,
From record history to present day, God has been Recognized as the Creator of All,
Excellent noting of Life Feeding Water's Necessity Value of Each Drop for Continued Human existence.
Blessing to you!
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Amen,
From record history to present day, God has been Recognized as the Creator of All,
Excellent noting of Life Feeding Water's Necessity Value of Each Drop for Continued Human existence.
Blessing to you!
Comment Written 12-Jul-2019
Comment from dovemarie
Dear Alcreator, Thank you for your spiritual fiction. It flowed freely, and the river and carrying water home reminded me of life. The names Samuel and Daniel were Biblical, yet your piece did not touch on any particular religion. Father and Son, were like human beings when I read your story, yet at the same time they reminded me of the first two persons of the Holy Trinity. Great work! Dove
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Dear Alcreator, Thank you for your spiritual fiction. It flowed freely, and the river and carrying water home reminded me of life. The names Samuel and Daniel were Biblical, yet your piece did not touch on any particular religion. Father and Son, were like human beings when I read your story, yet at the same time they reminded me of the first two persons of the Holy Trinity. Great work! Dove
Comment Written 12-Jul-2019
Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
this is an excellent play on words and if everyone thought like this, we could survive what is going on around us without the bad thoughts creeping in. Nice take
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this is an excellent play on words and if everyone thought like this, we could survive what is going on around us without the bad thoughts creeping in. Nice take
Comment Written 12-Jul-2019
Comment from Ulla
Hi there, I'm so glad to see that your faith is unfaltering, and that is good. I'm just so sorry I can't follow you on that trip. Again your piece needs a bit of editing. In places it doesn't make a lot of sense. Ulla
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Hi there, I'm so glad to see that your faith is unfaltering, and that is good. I'm just so sorry I can't follow you on that trip. Again your piece needs a bit of editing. In places it doesn't make a lot of sense. Ulla
Comment Written 12-Jul-2019
