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Comment from Goodadvicechan
The use of dialogue is very effective in this piece of writing. So is in real life in learning. The son is a quick learner. He is smart, he learns and he practices.
Excellent writing.
Thanks for sharing
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The use of dialogue is very effective in this piece of writing. So is in real life in learning. The son is a quick learner. He is smart, he learns and he practices.
Excellent writing.
Thanks for sharing
Comment Written 12-Apr-2021
Comment from Joan E.
Thank you for sharing this spiritual story about the misuse and waste of water. I admired your title and matching picture and the moral. Have a peaceful weekend when it arrives- Joan
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Thank you for sharing this spiritual story about the misuse and waste of water. I admired your title and matching picture and the moral. Have a peaceful weekend when it arrives- Joan
Comment Written 12-Jun-2020
Comment from joycetreasures
Alcreator Litt Dear,
Thanks for the detailed notes about this spiritual fiction in your own art and style of expression. First, the imagery used is an amazing picture showing Jesus on the mountainside with maybe his followers. You wrote a beautiful story between a father and son about who God really is? God does things at His pleasure, not ours, but it's always good. There is always a valuable story in all He does in our life. I love how you shared the story about not wasting water by the father to his son? Then, you wrote a beautiful ending to your story. What the father shared with his son was understood the valuable lesson about not wasting precious water. The son understood that the water gave life. Beautiful lesson. Good job on this one. Thanks. Happy writing:-) Stay safe.
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Alcreator Litt Dear,
Thanks for the detailed notes about this spiritual fiction in your own art and style of expression. First, the imagery used is an amazing picture showing Jesus on the mountainside with maybe his followers. You wrote a beautiful story between a father and son about who God really is? God does things at His pleasure, not ours, but it's always good. There is always a valuable story in all He does in our life. I love how you shared the story about not wasting water by the father to his son? Then, you wrote a beautiful ending to your story. What the father shared with his son was understood the valuable lesson about not wasting precious water. The son understood that the water gave life. Beautiful lesson. Good job on this one. Thanks. Happy writing:-) Stay safe.
Comment Written 28-Apr-2020
Comment from Shirley McLain
I did enjoy your writing on Samuel and Daniel. I think you did an excellent job on your non-fiction/fiction spiritual piece. Understanding the lessons was easy. Stay well. Shirley
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I did enjoy your writing on Samuel and Daniel. I think you did an excellent job on your non-fiction/fiction spiritual piece. Understanding the lessons was easy. Stay well. Shirley
Comment Written 28-Apr-2020
Comment from L.L.M
Hi there A very poignant inspiring Spiritual poem you wrote. Great message about God. Very well written and a rich description of words used, great poetry entry. Well done and best of luck. Lourens
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Hi there A very poignant inspiring Spiritual poem you wrote. Great message about God. Very well written and a rich description of words used, great poetry entry. Well done and best of luck. Lourens
Comment Written 28-Apr-2020
Comment from Gemelos
Well written and very meaningful! Indeed everything comes from God. Everything we owned on earth belong to God. Why does disaster or disease pandemic occur? As rightly pointed out "God teaches us value of life, ways to living, the way He likes". Amazing!
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Well written and very meaningful! Indeed everything comes from God. Everything we owned on earth belong to God. Why does disaster or disease pandemic occur? As rightly pointed out "God teaches us value of life, ways to living, the way He likes". Amazing!
Comment Written 27-Apr-2020
Comment from samandlancelot
Alcreator,
I like your explanation for God turning the land into a desert. He cares about nature like He cares about us. We are supposed to tend to the land, but we abuse it. God saved the river. Maybe we'll do better next time.
Patricia
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Alcreator,
I like your explanation for God turning the land into a desert. He cares about nature like He cares about us. We are supposed to tend to the land, but we abuse it. God saved the river. Maybe we'll do better next time.
Patricia
Comment Written 26-Apr-2020
Comment from Franklin Dillard
Hello Mr. Alcreator Litt Dear, That is one of the best put together references to a father's love for for his son. Sometimes we think of ourselves rather than others. Too many today are too busy thinking--WHATS IN IT FOR ME Or hear me roar.
My website is: www.havepenwilltravel.co
Franklin Dillard
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Hello Mr. Alcreator Litt Dear, That is one of the best put together references to a father's love for for his son. Sometimes we think of ourselves rather than others. Too many today are too busy thinking--WHATS IN IT FOR ME Or hear me roar.
My website is: www.havepenwilltravel.co
Franklin Dillard
Comment Written 26-Apr-2020
Comment from Elizabeth Emerald
Again, I like the father/son format and the focus on bringing life via water--a concrete touch not often found in poetry. I appreciate the extensive footnotes. Cheers. LIZ
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Again, I like the father/son format and the focus on bringing life via water--a concrete touch not often found in poetry. I appreciate the extensive footnotes. Cheers. LIZ
Comment Written 26-Apr-2020
Comment from Bill Schott
This story, God Teaches Us Life, is portrayed here as easily as a father helping his son realize that struggles and shortages teach us the respect for life we need to always have.
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This story, God Teaches Us Life, is portrayed here as easily as a father helping his son realize that struggles and shortages teach us the respect for life we need to always have.
Comment Written 25-Apr-2020
