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I can canI Ican canI Ican canI canI . . .44 total reviews
Comment from Gail Denham
To stress this "I can" can be invigorating and encouraging. Surely we, as humans, are blessed with so much creativity and creative genius. Think of the space ships, astronauts, all of which is controlled and monitored on earth - and how do they do that. Or delicate surgery. To believe "you can" is a start for sure.
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To stress this "I can" can be invigorating and encouraging. Surely we, as humans, are blessed with so much creativity and creative genius. Think of the space ships, astronauts, all of which is controlled and monitored on earth - and how do they do that. Or delicate surgery. To believe "you can" is a start for sure.
Comment Written 20-Jul-2019
Comment from Dorothy Farrell
Well Lobber, to be honest I doubt you will win the contest but have to say you had a very original idea, perhaps lacking a little in imaginations but showing loads of nerve LOL. Great picture - quite inspirational. Good Luck Dorothy
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Well Lobber, to be honest I doubt you will win the contest but have to say you had a very original idea, perhaps lacking a little in imaginations but showing loads of nerve LOL. Great picture - quite inspirational. Good Luck Dorothy
Comment Written 20-Jul-2019
Comment from Darlene Franklin
You captured that uncertainty and ambivalence so perfectly, so simply, and what a perfect picture. I think most writers live there, though, don't you? Not quite believing in ourselves? I have a hard time letting go of the need for validation.
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You captured that uncertainty and ambivalence so perfectly, so simply, and what a perfect picture. I think most writers live there, though, don't you? Not quite believing in ourselves? I have a hard time letting go of the need for validation.
Comment Written 19-Jul-2019
Comment from robyn corum
Lobber,
Really?
I don't know. I really want to be fair. I went through and read all the other reviews hoping for enlightenment and to see if you explained some of the reasoning behind this piece.
You did, and that helped a weeee bit. But I still don't think your explanation makes this measure up to a whole poem. I do believe this post, as it stands now, could be the foundational nugget that anchors a BRILLIANT poem, though, if you decided to follow through a bit more. That's my personal opinion - and we all know what those are worth. *smile*
(I'll pause a moment while you toss that last paragraph in the nearest waste basket...)
You're a really smart and talented writer and this post just highlights how you think so differently. I really wish you would develop this piece a little more. Add a few more lines that extend the thought concerning ambivalence and this crazy thing called life???
You're onto something wonderful, but not there yet - again - MY opinion.
Thanks and good luck!
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Lobber,
Really?
I don't know. I really want to be fair. I went through and read all the other reviews hoping for enlightenment and to see if you explained some of the reasoning behind this piece.
You did, and that helped a weeee bit. But I still don't think your explanation makes this measure up to a whole poem. I do believe this post, as it stands now, could be the foundational nugget that anchors a BRILLIANT poem, though, if you decided to follow through a bit more. That's my personal opinion - and we all know what those are worth. *smile*
(I'll pause a moment while you toss that last paragraph in the nearest waste basket...)
You're a really smart and talented writer and this post just highlights how you think so differently. I really wish you would develop this piece a little more. Add a few more lines that extend the thought concerning ambivalence and this crazy thing called life???
You're onto something wonderful, but not there yet - again - MY opinion.
Thanks and good luck!
Comment Written 19-Jul-2019
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This speaks what you can, and what, what and what you can, what and what you can on this world; well said, well done. Liked and enjoyed the read. Write-Inspire --DR ALCREATOR
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This speaks what you can, and what, what and what you can, what and what you can on this world; well said, well done. Liked and enjoyed the read. Write-Inspire --DR ALCREATOR
Comment Written 19-Jul-2019
Comment from Bichon
Definitely a unique poem. There is definitely doubt in today's world and it appears quite frequently, mentally and physically. The photo is a good representation too.
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Definitely a unique poem. There is definitely doubt in today's world and it appears quite frequently, mentally and physically. The photo is a good representation too.
Comment Written 18-Jul-2019
Comment from Joy Graham
Hi Lobber,
I get your point that you can. However, for a contest entry, I believe you, "can" use a few more words to describe what exactly you, "can" do. It would help your readers get to know you a little better. You have a gorgeous picture to work with.
Just my thoughts.
Sincerely Joy xx
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Hi Lobber,
I get your point that you can. However, for a contest entry, I believe you, "can" use a few more words to describe what exactly you, "can" do. It would help your readers get to know you a little better. You have a gorgeous picture to work with.
Just my thoughts.
Sincerely Joy xx
Comment Written 18-Jul-2019
Comment from Heather Knight
I can relate to your poem. We should repeat this like a mantra (at least I should) to increase our self-esteem.
Thanks for sharing and good luck in the contest.
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I can relate to your poem. We should repeat this like a mantra (at least I should) to increase our self-esteem.
Thanks for sharing and good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 18-Jul-2019
Comment from Mastery
I am sorry, Lobber, but I do not see much effort in this entry for the contest. simply repeating the "I can" subject title is not a good poem in my estimation. I could be totally wrong though, so let's see what others say. Bless you. Bob
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I am sorry, Lobber, but I do not see much effort in this entry for the contest. simply repeating the "I can" subject title is not a good poem in my estimation. I could be totally wrong though, so let's see what others say. Bless you. Bob
Comment Written 18-Jul-2019
Comment from the13thpoet
*done in my totally horrible Yoda impression* for it's simplicity.....give your poem 4 stars.. I will I will I will I will I will I will I will I will I will I will...
Good luck in the contest.
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*done in my totally horrible Yoda impression* for it's simplicity.....give your poem 4 stars.. I will I will I will I will I will I will I will I will I will I will...
Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 18-Jul-2019
