The Everlasting Dance
Waltzing through life together63 total reviews
Comment from sunnilicious
Great overall presentation. Nice artwork choice. Passion goes with all things that we love. Sharing is only natural. Carefree with a nice lyrical flow. Your poem was enjoyable to read. Creative. Romantic. Uplifting. Nice work.
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2019
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Great overall presentation. Nice artwork choice. Passion goes with all things that we love. Sharing is only natural. Carefree with a nice lyrical flow. Your poem was enjoyable to read. Creative. Romantic. Uplifting. Nice work.
Comment Written 12-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2019
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thanks very much, Sunnilicious! I appreciate this lovely review.
Comment from misscookie
Hey, I love everything about the artwork to the words of your poem
you captured my attention from the first line to the last
in fact as I was reading my body starting swaying to a song in my mind ( I want to dance with some body) smile
thank you for sharing
cookie
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2019
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Hey, I love everything about the artwork to the words of your poem
you captured my attention from the first line to the last
in fact as I was reading my body starting swaying to a song in my mind ( I want to dance with some body) smile
thank you for sharing
cookie
Comment Written 12-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2019
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Thank you, Sweet Miss Cookie! I love this review. xo
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You are very welcome have a blessed day
cookie
Comment from Heather Knight
Aww! This is beautiful. Upbeat and romantic. And I agree with what you say. We've been lucky to find the right one. Not everybody does...
Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2019
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Aww! This is beautiful. Upbeat and romantic. And I agree with what you say. We've been lucky to find the right one. Not everybody does...
Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 12-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2019
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No. And the first time, I didn't. I needed a Mulligan! Thanks for this review, Maria. xo
Comment from ruzu27
This is a short but very joyful poem. In my mind, I see a child, sitting high up on the branch of a fir tree, the same my cousin and I had in the garden and used it.
I met that cousin lately and we sat happly in the garden, talking about that time full of joy. Now reading your poem that happy feeling was back.
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2019
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This is a short but very joyful poem. In my mind, I see a child, sitting high up on the branch of a fir tree, the same my cousin and I had in the garden and used it.
I met that cousin lately and we sat happly in the garden, talking about that time full of joy. Now reading your poem that happy feeling was back.
Comment Written 12-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2019
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I love that about poem, don't you, Ruzu? They evoke such personal joy for each person who reads it, and they take away their own person slant on them. Thank you for this delightful review this morning. xo
Comment from MissMerri
Just delightful in every way. The meter of this poem and the counting make it feel like waltzing. It is so true... when you are with the right one... it is a dance of joy. I relate.
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2019
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Just delightful in every way. The meter of this poem and the counting make it feel like waltzing. It is so true... when you are with the right one... it is a dance of joy. I relate.
Comment Written 12-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2019
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I KNEW you, with your perfect talent for rhythm, would understand that I did this as a waltz!! You validate me, Miss Merri!! Thank you for the wonderful review. xo
Comment from duchessofdrumborg
"The Everlasting Dance", is an extremely well-written and heart-warming piece. This talented poet's work was a pleasure to both read and review. To me, this is a six, but unfortunately, I'm not given enough of them. I look forward to seeing your next post.
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2019
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"The Everlasting Dance", is an extremely well-written and heart-warming piece. This talented poet's work was a pleasure to both read and review. To me, this is a six, but unfortunately, I'm not given enough of them. I look forward to seeing your next post.
Comment Written 11-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2019
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Thanks very much!
You're very welcome!
Comment from Gloria ....
This is great, Rachelle. The rhythm is perfectly in sync with the motion of two.
The internal rhymes make this is genuine treat. :)
Thank you for sharing.
Gloria
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2019
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This is great, Rachelle. The rhythm is perfectly in sync with the motion of two.
The internal rhymes make this is genuine treat. :)
Thank you for sharing.
Gloria
Comment Written 11-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2019
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Thank you, Gloria. I thought a waltz cadence would do the trick for a poem about dance. xo
Comment from Janetsue
This reads so beautifully and the love held for each other comes through throughout every line. It is a dance of happiness and I am glad you have shared it. Best wishes with your entry.
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2019
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This reads so beautifully and the love held for each other comes through throughout every line. It is a dance of happiness and I am glad you have shared it. Best wishes with your entry.
Comment Written 11-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2019
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Thanks very much, Spangle. I appreciate this love review. xo
Comment from Jeffrey L. Michaux
This sounds like a beautiful partners ballet. Perhaps it's pairs figure skating. I love watching pairs figure skating and how in sync the two parties are. They flow so smoothly as if they're one person, jumping, spinning, flowing. I like this everlasting dance and the rhyme and flow of it. Well done Rachelle! You should do well in the contest. You've been tearing them up quite well.
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2019
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This sounds like a beautiful partners ballet. Perhaps it's pairs figure skating. I love watching pairs figure skating and how in sync the two parties are. They flow so smoothly as if they're one person, jumping, spinning, flowing. I like this everlasting dance and the rhyme and flow of it. Well done Rachelle! You should do well in the contest. You've been tearing them up quite well.
Comment Written 11-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2019
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Figure skaters ARE so beautiful to watch. So it is quite the compliment that this poem evoked that idea in your mind. Thank you for the lovely review and well-wishes in the contest. xo
Comment from Robert Zimmerman
Hi Rachelle. We meet again. lol Of course I liked the poem because it seemed melodic to me and it rolled off my tongue as I read it out loud. The message is great because we all want that and many never get there. Your author's note was skillful. Robert
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2019
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Hi Rachelle. We meet again. lol Of course I liked the poem because it seemed melodic to me and it rolled off my tongue as I read it out loud. The message is great because we all want that and many never get there. Your author's note was skillful. Robert
Comment Written 11-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2019
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I really appreciate this kind and complimentary review, Robert. Thank you. xo
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You are very welcome.
