The Everlasting Dance
Waltzing through life together63 total reviews
Comment from June Sargent
So true! With the right partner the music will last forever as you stay in tune with heart, mind and soul. It's rare to find this kind of love. So hold onto it!
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So true! With the right partner the music will last forever as you stay in tune with heart, mind and soul. It's rare to find this kind of love. So hold onto it!
Comment Written 11-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2019
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Wild horses could not drag me away, June!! Thanks for the understanding review!! xo
Comment from Thomas Bowling
This is a great poem. The picture you have chosen is perfect. It expresses in art what yo express. in words. It's an excellent contest entry and will do well. I predict a winner.
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This is a great poem. The picture you have chosen is perfect. It expresses in art what yo express. in words. It's an excellent contest entry and will do well. I predict a winner.
Comment Written 11-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2019
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I don't know; I've read other really good entries today. Everyone has brought his or her A Game to this contest, which makes it exciting and fun. But thank you very much for your vote of confidence. I always appreciate your kind reviews, Thomas. xo
Comment from Raul1
I enjoy Dancing with women very much. It is very entertaining and romantic. I like this poem. Excellent work! Good luck in the contest! No grammatical errors.
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I enjoy Dancing with women very much. It is very entertaining and romantic. I like this poem. Excellent work! Good luck in the contest! No grammatical errors.
Comment Written 11-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2019
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Thanks, Raul.
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You're welcome
Comment from Ulla
Hi Rachelle, I loved this free style poem about dancing through the life you've chosen with your loved one. It's very very good. I'm sure you'll have my vote. All best and good luck. All best. Ulla:)))
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2019
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Hi Rachelle, I loved this free style poem about dancing through the life you've chosen with your loved one. It's very very good. I'm sure you'll have my vote. All best and good luck. All best. Ulla:)))
Comment Written 11-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2019
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You're always so generous and kind to me, Ulla. Thank you for this lovely review. xo
Comment from DeborahWrite
Dear Rachelle,
I loved the waltz pace of your exceptional poem! Your selected photograph of two posing in harmony, is beautiful. I also love their upward pose! As a former dancer, your thoughts are an eloquent visualization of love.
My best,
Deborah
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Dear Rachelle,
I loved the waltz pace of your exceptional poem! Your selected photograph of two posing in harmony, is beautiful. I also love their upward pose! As a former dancer, your thoughts are an eloquent visualization of love.
My best,
Deborah
Comment Written 11-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2019
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What a nice review this is! Thank you very much, Deborah. xo
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My pleasure xo
Comment from Sally Law
This is beautifully penned and illustrated, Rachelle. I am so happy you javelin someone special to dance through life with arm in arm. It makes all the difference. Sending you my best today as always and in the upcoming contest,
Sally xo
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This is beautifully penned and illustrated, Rachelle. I am so happy you javelin someone special to dance through life with arm in arm. It makes all the difference. Sending you my best today as always and in the upcoming contest,
Sally xo
Comment Written 11-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2019
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Thank you very much, Sally; I totally appreciate that. xo
Comment from A. Willow Bends
I need a six. I NEED a six. How absolutely beautiful. I would have known this is yours even without a name on it! What does that say about how familiar I am becoming with your writing. This is so very simple and clean, so honest and lovely with the photo you chose. Yep. It could only have been yours! Good luck. Now, do I even want to enter????
:)
Wendy
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I need a six. I NEED a six. How absolutely beautiful. I would have known this is yours even without a name on it! What does that say about how familiar I am becoming with your writing. This is so very simple and clean, so honest and lovely with the photo you chose. Yep. It could only have been yours! Good luck. Now, do I even want to enter????
:)
Wendy
Comment Written 11-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2019
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I love your reviews; they always make me feel so good! Thank you very much for this one today. xo
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You are ever so welcome! :)
Comment from robyn corum
Rachelle,
This is a nice submission for the dancing contest. It has a distinct rhythm and dance feel. I can see how you would be able to translate dance to poetry better than some - since you spend so much time doing both! hahaha Good luck!
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2019
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Rachelle,
This is a nice submission for the dancing contest. It has a distinct rhythm and dance feel. I can see how you would be able to translate dance to poetry better than some - since you spend so much time doing both! hahaha Good luck!
Comment Written 11-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2019
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It's true! Dancing is my favorite form of expression! Thank you for this really lovely review, Robyn. xo
Comment from Gail Denham
I do like poems about dancing - I write as many as I can on that subject. Altho with bad knees, dancing is now a chore, I like to "feel " as if I'm dancing. To watch the g.kids dance. Makes me glad
good poem
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I do like poems about dancing - I write as many as I can on that subject. Altho with bad knees, dancing is now a chore, I like to "feel " as if I'm dancing. To watch the g.kids dance. Makes me glad
good poem
Comment Written 11-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2019
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Yes, even watching dance is a wonderful feeling! I couldn't agree with you more. Thank you for this nice review, Gail. xo
Comment from susand3022
Hi Rachelle, You know what the best thing about this poem is? It can be set to so many different waltzes and murmured as a sweet nothing in your darling's ear as you dance. :)
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2019
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Hi Rachelle, You know what the best thing about this poem is? It can be set to so many different waltzes and murmured as a sweet nothing in your darling's ear as you dance. :)
Comment Written 11-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2019
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You are EXACTLY right! Thank you, Susan. What a lovely review this is. xo
