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Viewing comments for Chapter 9 "Waiting For Tarzan"art inspired poetry
16 total reviews
Comment from Amenian Aypotheeno
Well Rudyard Kipling, Edward Bulwer Lytton, Henry Rider Haggard, Arthur Conan Doyle and Edgar Rice Burroughs can all eat their heart out simultaneously and choke with laughter on this primal man'date' of yours! Excellent witty and rolling rhyme, make this a superb smile inducing poem and that makes you rout for the damsel in waiting! So whens the book due? :)
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2019
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Well Rudyard Kipling, Edward Bulwer Lytton, Henry Rider Haggard, Arthur Conan Doyle and Edgar Rice Burroughs can all eat their heart out simultaneously and choke with laughter on this primal man'date' of yours! Excellent witty and rolling rhyme, make this a superb smile inducing poem and that makes you rout for the damsel in waiting! So whens the book due? :)
Comment Written 14-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2019
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Hello :)
Thank you so much for reading and reviewing and for the generous 6 star award. I really do appreciate your feedback!
Best wishes, Debra :)
Ps: Please forgive me for the cut and paste reply. I've been off site for a few days and haven't much time to catch up with reviews!
Comment from Y. M. Roger
Hooray!! :) You have an ape-man for a dinner date....I'm thinking they'll be some banana souffle and, perhaps, banana pudding..? :) ;) LOL! :) Just be sure he puts 'Cheetah' out the house before things get intimate! ;) ;) A wonderful imagination you have, Lady Debra! ;) Thanx for sharing! ;) Yvette
*Sorry behind on reviews...just getting home from my youngest's 2-day college orientation (and of course travel time!) plus prep for same's wisdom teeth removal early Monday....can you say 'no time on computer'....LOL!
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2019
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Hooray!! :) You have an ape-man for a dinner date....I'm thinking they'll be some banana souffle and, perhaps, banana pudding..? :) ;) LOL! :) Just be sure he puts 'Cheetah' out the house before things get intimate! ;) ;) A wonderful imagination you have, Lady Debra! ;) Thanx for sharing! ;) Yvette
*Sorry behind on reviews...just getting home from my youngest's 2-day college orientation (and of course travel time!) plus prep for same's wisdom teeth removal early Monday....can you say 'no time on computer'....LOL!
Comment Written 12-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2019
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Hello :)
Thank you so much for reading and reviewing. I really do appreciate your feedback!
Best wishes, Debra :)
Ps: Please forgive me for the cut and paste reply. I've been off site for a few days and haven't much time to catch up with reviews!
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written humorous poem and an excellent interpretation of the picture provided by the club. Luckily she did not decide to jump because her date was late, a pleasant shocking surprise when tarzan shows up.
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2019
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A very well-written humorous poem and an excellent interpretation of the picture provided by the club. Luckily she did not decide to jump because her date was late, a pleasant shocking surprise when tarzan shows up.
Comment Written 12-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2019
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Hello :)
Thank you so much for reading and reviewing. I really do appreciate your feedback!
Best wishes, Debra :)
Ps: Please forgive me for the cut and paste reply. I've been off site for a few days and haven't much time to catch up with reviews!
Comment from jenintorre
This is a great poem Debra. I love it. My kind of humour.
He's not here and get his arse in gear. Great rhyme. Thanks for the laugh. All the best. Jen.
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2019
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This is a great poem Debra. I love it. My kind of humour.
He's not here and get his arse in gear. Great rhyme. Thanks for the laugh. All the best. Jen.
Comment Written 11-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2019
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Hello :)
Thank you so much for reading and reviewing. I really do appreciate your feedback!
Best wishes, Debra :)
Ps: Please forgive me for the cut and paste reply. I've been off site for a few days and haven't much time to catch up with reviews!
Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
I love it, it rocks a story about blind date on the internet and meeting her tarzan, without underwear of course, in the trees where he lives his life. Nicely done
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2019
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I love it, it rocks a story about blind date on the internet and meeting her tarzan, without underwear of course, in the trees where he lives his life. Nicely done
Comment Written 11-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2019
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Hello :)
Thank you so much for reading and reviewing. I really do appreciate your feedback!
Best wishes, Debra :)
Ps: Please forgive me for the cut and paste reply. I've been off site for a few days and haven't much time to catch up with reviews!
Comment from Sally Law
Does your hubby know you're out on a limb waiting for the hunk? Sean is probably the hunk. ,+) a fun poem, so creative and fresh for the writing prompt. Good luck in the contest, dear Debra.
Sending you my best today as always,
Sally xo
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2019
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Does your hubby know you're out on a limb waiting for the hunk? Sean is probably the hunk. ,+) a fun poem, so creative and fresh for the writing prompt. Good luck in the contest, dear Debra.
Sending you my best today as always,
Sally xo
Comment Written 11-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2019
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Hello :)
Thank you so much for reading and reviewing. I really do appreciate your feedback!
Best wishes, Debra :)
Ps: Please forgive me for the cut and paste reply. I've been off site for a few days and haven't much time to catch up with reviews!
Comment from BeasPeas
Oh this is terrific, Debra. Sorry not to have a sixer for you. Great job with theme and rhyming. NOW we know why she waited so long on the bridge. Who wouldn't? I'm glad you made it for this post. Marilyn
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2019
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Oh this is terrific, Debra. Sorry not to have a sixer for you. Great job with theme and rhyming. NOW we know why she waited so long on the bridge. Who wouldn't? I'm glad you made it for this post. Marilyn
Comment Written 11-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2019
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Hello :)
Thank you so much for reading and reviewing. I really do appreciate your feedback!
Best wishes, Debra :)
Ps: Please forgive me for the cut and paste reply. I've been off site for a few days and haven't much time to catch up with reviews!
Comment from Heather Knight
This is gorgeous, Debra. No matter how busy you are, you still have what it takes.
Your poems are well written and sooo funny.
Thanks for sharing and for brightening up my morning.
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2019
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This is gorgeous, Debra. No matter how busy you are, you still have what it takes.
Your poems are well written and sooo funny.
Thanks for sharing and for brightening up my morning.
Comment Written 11-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2019
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Hello :)
Thank you so much for reading and reviewing and for the generous 6 star award. I really do appreciate your feedback!
Best wishes, Debra :)
Ps: Please forgive me for the cut and paste reply. I've been off site for a few days and haven't much time to catch up with reviews!
Comment from Thomas Bowling
Now you're embarrassing me. It's so nice of you to talk about this way. You should give yourself a pen name. Debra Write would be a nice description of your talents.
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2019
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Now you're embarrassing me. It's so nice of you to talk about this way. You should give yourself a pen name. Debra Write would be a nice description of your talents.
Comment Written 10-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2019
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Hello :)
Thank you so much for reading and reviewing. I really do appreciate your feedback!
Best wishes, Debra :)
Ps: Please forgive me for the cut and paste reply. I've been off site for a few days and haven't much time to catch up with reviews!
Comment from Rachelle Allen
OMG!!! HAHAHAHAHAH! Tarzan on a Tinder date!! This is hilarious and classic, Debra! I couldn't love it more. The visuals you presented are priceless!! Clever and SO very fun to read! xo
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2019
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OMG!!! HAHAHAHAHAH! Tarzan on a Tinder date!! This is hilarious and classic, Debra! I couldn't love it more. The visuals you presented are priceless!! Clever and SO very fun to read! xo
Comment Written 10-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2019
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Hello :)
Thank you so much for reading and reviewing. I really do appreciate your feedback!
Best wishes, Debra :)
Ps: Please forgive me for the cut and paste reply. I've been off site for a few days and haven't much time to catch up with reviews!
