God Waits
283 word fiction; God waits27 total reviews
Comment from JLR
The Acronym is buried well deeply in this piece. And I very much appreciate as much as your dream work your authors notes. Very well crafted, leaving no pebble unturned for this Soul bound in this human form working daily on SoulCrafting for the journey beyond.... continue grand successes!
  |
The Acronym is buried well deeply in this piece. And I very much appreciate as much as your dream work your authors notes. Very well crafted, leaving no pebble unturned for this Soul bound in this human form working daily on SoulCrafting for the journey beyond.... continue grand successes!
Comment Written 10-Jul-2019
Comment from Ulla
Hi There, again you show your deep faith and this time it is about a love/ hate relation. I expect that God was awaiting Daniel. An interesting dream indeed, that you had there. All best. Ulla
|
Hi There, again you show your deep faith and this time it is about a love/ hate relation. I expect that God was awaiting Daniel. An interesting dream indeed, that you had there. All best. Ulla
Comment Written 10-Jul-2019
Comment from Darlene BoClair
As I read your story it is so hard to review. The love/hate relationship I respect the way you have chosen to tell. I value the dialogue, the background information before the dream was awaken by the dog. God I believe waits for Daniel as one would say Daniel waited for God.
|
As I read your story it is so hard to review. The love/hate relationship I respect the way you have chosen to tell. I value the dialogue, the background information before the dream was awaken by the dog. God I believe waits for Daniel as one would say Daniel waited for God.
Comment Written 10-Jul-2019
Comment from Teri7
This is a very interesting post you have penned my friend. That had to be a really awesome dream. You used very good descriptive words and very good imagery from the art work you chose. Thank you for sharing. Blessings, Teri
|
This is a very interesting post you have penned my friend. That had to be a really awesome dream. You used very good descriptive words and very good imagery from the art work you chose. Thank you for sharing. Blessings, Teri
Comment Written 10-Jul-2019
Comment from kahpot
I don't believe you could offend with your beliefs, this is a story as you see it, the hate part is for the owner to resolve, this is a very interesting read****kahpot
|
I don't believe you could offend with your beliefs, this is a story as you see it, the hate part is for the owner to resolve, this is a very interesting read****kahpot
Comment Written 10-Jul-2019
Comment from Mystic Angel 7777
There are many who have had a visit to heaven (it's called an Near Death Experience) and came back to tell of it but nobody listens, yet it is all good since the experience uplifts the person themselves and through their example can show others the way. Nicely done and thank you very much for sharing it.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
|
There are many who have had a visit to heaven (it's called an Near Death Experience) and came back to tell of it but nobody listens, yet it is all good since the experience uplifts the person themselves and through their example can show others the way. Nicely done and thank you very much for sharing it.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 10-Jul-2019
Comment from Sandra Montanino
I always enjoy reading the stories and poems when authors write about their testimony of our Lord. I think you wrote a passionate story, but I have to say, I didn't quite follow your reference to HATE.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
|
I always enjoy reading the stories and poems when authors write about their testimony of our Lord. I think you wrote a passionate story, but I have to say, I didn't quite follow your reference to HATE.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 10-Jul-2019
