God Waits
283 word fiction; God waits27 total reviews
Comment from dovemarie
Dear Alcreator, Amonologue dream expressingspirituality! I thought Daniel was a Biblical character, but when you wrote he was a "sagely person" your mentor, friend, philosopher and guide, it seems as though he is a person who means a lot to you. To me, he personifies God HImself, again, I appreciate this nottouching on any specific religion, yet expresses wisdom, truth and knowledge. Dove
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Dear Alcreator, Amonologue dream expressingspirituality! I thought Daniel was a Biblical character, but when you wrote he was a "sagely person" your mentor, friend, philosopher and guide, it seems as though he is a person who means a lot to you. To me, he personifies God HImself, again, I appreciate this nottouching on any specific religion, yet expresses wisdom, truth and knowledge. Dove
Comment Written 12-Jul-2019
Comment from sunnilicious
I don't think anyone is "eligible for the HATE". It's a bad word in the dictionary. If we get rid of bad words, we get rid of the behaviors. Hahahahaha, I wish it were that simple.
Well written story. Enjoyable to read.
God is great
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I don't think anyone is "eligible for the HATE". It's a bad word in the dictionary. If we get rid of bad words, we get rid of the behaviors. Hahahahaha, I wish it were that simple.
Well written story. Enjoyable to read.
God is great
Comment Written 11-Jul-2019
Comment from tfawcus
This is an interesting exposition of your dream. The only suggestion I have is to elucidate the acronym HATE earlier on thin the piece, when it is first mentioned. I had to wit till the very end to find "'I have qualified the HATE or Heaven Accession Test Examination".
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This is an interesting exposition of your dream. The only suggestion I have is to elucidate the acronym HATE earlier on thin the piece, when it is first mentioned. I had to wit till the very end to find "'I have qualified the HATE or Heaven Accession Test Examination".
Comment Written 11-Jul-2019
Comment from BeasPeas
Your opening line is a good one, "God I thank you." Too seldom do we thank him for each day he gives us. Gratitude is the key to contentment. As we read further, we find that HATE is an acronym for Heaven Accession Test Examination, which according to some is a self-appraisal after death, allowed by God, for us to realize all the hurt we may have inflicted upon others. I believe the same thing you state here, "God is religion free." Marilyn
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Your opening line is a good one, "God I thank you." Too seldom do we thank him for each day he gives us. Gratitude is the key to contentment. As we read further, we find that HATE is an acronym for Heaven Accession Test Examination, which according to some is a self-appraisal after death, allowed by God, for us to realize all the hurt we may have inflicted upon others. I believe the same thing you state here, "God is religion free." Marilyn
Comment Written 11-Jul-2019
Comment from royowen
Of course, truth is very much a "God concept, the closest we can get to truth is to be honest. To tell the absolute truth one needs to know everything, and we simply don't, well done, good article, blessings, Roy
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Of course, truth is very much a "God concept, the closest we can get to truth is to be honest. To tell the absolute truth one needs to know everything, and we simply don't, well done, good article, blessings, Roy
Comment Written 11-Jul-2019
Comment from Janetsue
I think dreams are very important, and they have a physical purpose as well because they help to release subconscious tension. Unfortunately, unpleasant dreams can be very disturbing and we need to put them in their rightful place, which is by knowing that anything troubling and full of darkness is balanced out by the light of love reflected from God.
Free will is supposed to be used to make wise decisions. The more of them we make, the more emotional comfort we receive. I smile a lot just thinking about one future day in eternity when only the light of purity and joy fills my life.
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I think dreams are very important, and they have a physical purpose as well because they help to release subconscious tension. Unfortunately, unpleasant dreams can be very disturbing and we need to put them in their rightful place, which is by knowing that anything troubling and full of darkness is balanced out by the light of love reflected from God.
Free will is supposed to be used to make wise decisions. The more of them we make, the more emotional comfort we receive. I smile a lot just thinking about one future day in eternity when only the light of purity and joy fills my life.
Comment Written 11-Jul-2019
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written fiction story about your dream about the HATE or Heaven Accession Test Examination you have explained in your story, it is a beautiful dreams to cherish, onew of the ways God talk to us are dreams and visions.
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A very well-written fiction story about your dream about the HATE or Heaven Accession Test Examination you have explained in your story, it is a beautiful dreams to cherish, onew of the ways God talk to us are dreams and visions.
Comment Written 11-Jul-2019
Comment from Brenda Henderson
Just curious was the part about the HATE real or fictional to enhance the dream related here? Interesting story. You did an excellent job of capturing and maintaining your readers attention. Well written.Eloquently expressed. Solid effort!
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Just curious was the part about the HATE real or fictional to enhance the dream related here? Interesting story. You did an excellent job of capturing and maintaining your readers attention. Well written.Eloquently expressed. Solid effort!
Comment Written 11-Jul-2019
Comment from Sugarray77
I enjoyed following along on your spiritual journey to view the progress Daniel made up to heaven. You described it very well. I like the descriptive phrases and thoughts.
Melissa
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I enjoyed following along on your spiritual journey to view the progress Daniel made up to heaven. You described it very well. I like the descriptive phrases and thoughts.
Melissa
Comment Written 10-Jul-2019
Comment from misscookie
Amen
thank you very much for that beautiful up lifting story
your captured my attention from the first line to the last my grandma use to tell you can learn more sometimes from a dream then in real lifer
Thank you for sharing
Cookie
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Amen
thank you very much for that beautiful up lifting story
your captured my attention from the first line to the last my grandma use to tell you can learn more sometimes from a dream then in real lifer
Thank you for sharing
Cookie
Comment Written 10-Jul-2019
