Comment from Brenda Henderson

Excellent

Well written. You can feel the passion in this piece. The artwork chosen is indeed perfect for this poem. Also technically you met the requirements of the Tetractys! Eloquently written. Great job!

 Comment Written 10-Jul-2019

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reply by the author on 10-Jul-2019

Thank you very much

reply by Brenda Henderson on 10-Jul-2019

You're Welcome!

Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear

Excellent

This tells love is unison, concordance, balance and harmony between hearts that can face even fire; well said, well done. Liked and enjoyed the read. Write-Inspire --DR ALCREATOR

 Comment Written 10-Jul-2019

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reply by the author on 10-Jul-2019

Thank you very much

Comment from Roxanna Andrews

Excellent

What a great picture. I have a hard time finding the pictures I want. Anyway this is very well done, a sweet but strong poem showing the strength of real love. Well done. Hope you do well in the contest. Rox

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 Comment Written 10-Jul-2019

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reply by the author on 10-Jul-2019

Thank you very much

Comment from Pam (respa)

Excellent

-Very striking artwork
and nice presentation.
-The syllable count is good,
and the imagery is effective.
-Good use of alliteration.
-The last line is very good
that shows the strength
and bond in this relationship.
-Good luck in the contest.


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 Comment Written 10-Jul-2019

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reply by the author on 10-Jul-2019

Thank you very much

reply by Pam (respa) on 10-Jul-2019

You are welcome.