Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

I have been there and know these feelings, the yearning and the silence, the drifting and the memories, you touched my heart with these words, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 10-Jul-2019

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reply by the author on 11-Jul-2019

Thank you, Dolly. Your thoughtful words and always very much appreciated. ~DDx

Comment from royowen

Excellent

Like you, we have had many cross the bridge into Canaan land. Probably our turn is not far off. A beautifully written entry in this three line poetry contest, most enjoyable, blessings, Roy

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 Comment Written 10-Jul-2019

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reply by the author on 11-Jul-2019

Thank you, Roy, for your warm and thoughtful review. Your words are much appreciated. ~DD

reply by royowen on 11-Jul-2019

Most welcome

Comment from Janilou

Excellent

still silence finds me
drifting on soft memories
towards the warmth of your smile

It's just beautiful, and happy and sad all at once. I really enjoyed the warm thoughts it brought to me of passed loved ones.
Thank you for sharing this.
All the best,
Jan

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 Comment Written 10-Jul-2019

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reply by the author on 12-Jul-2019

Jan, thank you for taking the time to review my short poem. Your thoughtful words and review are very much appreciated. ~DD