A True Heart
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Comment from Thomas Bowling
This is one of the most beautiful and meaningful poems I have ever read. It is perfect in its simplicity and depth. Any person would be extremely pleased to have this written for them. Good luck in the contest.
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This is one of the most beautiful and meaningful poems I have ever read. It is perfect in its simplicity and depth. Any person would be extremely pleased to have this written for them. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 10-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2019
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Wow! this is a very inspirational and uplifting review, very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from Mark D. R.
A delicately worded romantic-type poem. Interesting illustration too!
You used this 5-7-5 format very effectively for creating the imagery for your contest entry.
Good luck!
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A delicately worded romantic-type poem. Interesting illustration too!
You used this 5-7-5 format very effectively for creating the imagery for your contest entry.
Good luck!
Comment Written 09-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2019
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Thank you very much, much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from Diana L Crawford
Beautiful! Writing in such a structured way is no easy feat! This flows with such grace and truth! You captured the idea true love excellently through the image of hearts touching! Love the pic too! xoxo I wish I had a six to give as it is deserving! (They could at least spare us a few 5.5's-ha)
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reply by the author on 10-Jul-2019
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Beautiful! Writing in such a structured way is no easy feat! This flows with such grace and truth! You captured the idea true love excellently through the image of hearts touching! Love the pic too! xoxo I wish I had a six to give as it is deserving! (They could at least spare us a few 5.5's-ha)
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Comment Written 09-Jul-2019
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Thank you very much, yes love is a good subject, much appreciate your reviews****kahpot
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
I enjoyed reading your 575 contest entry, kahpot. Good job with the syllable count per line. Your few syllables, as required, speak of a true , lasting, deeply felt, committed love of two people. The art is a great choice. Thanks for sharing and best wishes. Jan
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I enjoyed reading your 575 contest entry, kahpot. Good job with the syllable count per line. Your few syllables, as required, speak of a true , lasting, deeply felt, committed love of two people. The art is a great choice. Thanks for sharing and best wishes. Jan
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Comment Written 09-Jul-2019
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Thank you very much, always appreciate your reviews****kahpot
