A True Heart
Belief in34 total reviews
Comment from BeasPeas
This is a nicely composed short poem about being with the right person. When we do meet that special person, we do believe that true love does exist. Best of luck in the contest. Marilyn
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This is a nicely composed short poem about being with the right person. When we do meet that special person, we do believe that true love does exist. Best of luck in the contest. Marilyn
Comment Written 11-Jul-2019
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Thank you very much for your wonderful review****kahpot
Comment from Joan E.
Here's to the existence of true love! I enjoyed your 5-7-5's salute to "A True Heart" and the mesmerizing artwork. Best wishes in the competition- Joan
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Here's to the existence of true love! I enjoyed your 5-7-5's salute to "A True Heart" and the mesmerizing artwork. Best wishes in the competition- Joan
Comment Written 11-Jul-2019
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Thank you for your very encouraging review, much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from Robert Zimmerman
Hello Kahpot. That is a great message in a 5-7-5. It is so hard to get a complete, coherent message in the style but you have accomplished it with a love story. Good work. Robert
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Hello Kahpot. That is a great message in a 5-7-5. It is so hard to get a complete, coherent message in the style but you have accomplished it with a love story. Good work. Robert
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Thank you very much for your excellent review****kahpot
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You're welcome.
Comment from Lance S. Loria
A very logical love poem...is that possible? Your poem flows easily and was enjoyable to read. No edits or adjustments necessary.
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A very logical love poem...is that possible? Your poem flows easily and was enjoyable to read. No edits or adjustments necessary.
Comment Written 11-Jul-2019
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Thank you for this wonderful review****kahpot
Comment from royowen
True love is very hard to apprehend, finding it even harder, but when one does it seems foolish to throw it away. A beautifully written entry in this 5/7/5 poetry contest, well done, good luck, blessings, Roy
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True love is very hard to apprehend, finding it even harder, but when one does it seems foolish to throw it away. A beautifully written entry in this 5/7/5 poetry contest, well done, good luck, blessings, Roy
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Thank you for this wonderful review****kahpot
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My pleasure
Comment from jusylee72
Short poems have always been hard for me to write. However, I believe you have succinctly Illustrated in very few words that love is all about acceptance of each other and belief in the future. Great job on this one.
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Short poems have always been hard for me to write. However, I believe you have succinctly Illustrated in very few words that love is all about acceptance of each other and belief in the future. Great job on this one.
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Thank you for this wonderful review****kahpot
Comment from juliaSjames
The first line of this short write is most beautifully phrased and everything else flows from this physical and emotional connection.
My younger granddaughter invented a private game with me when she was four where we touched each other's hearts. It's our personal connection.
Best of luck in the contest with this beautifully written and presented entry.
Blessings Julia
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The first line of this short write is most beautifully phrased and everything else flows from this physical and emotional connection.
My younger granddaughter invented a private game with me when she was four where we touched each other's hearts. It's our personal connection.
Best of luck in the contest with this beautifully written and presented entry.
Blessings Julia
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Thank you very much for this wonderful review****kahpot
Comment from A. Willow Bends
This should be framed and given to your loved one. It is beautiful and loaded with intense love and meaning. The overall effect with the visual and your words is stunning and quite romantic. The fact that you included "acceptance" shouts out to me as I believe, truly believe that when we accept one another for who we truly are, that is when true love blossoms.
This is astoundingly beautiful and if anyone suggests change, ignore them!
Wendy
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This should be framed and given to your loved one. It is beautiful and loaded with intense love and meaning. The overall effect with the visual and your words is stunning and quite romantic. The fact that you included "acceptance" shouts out to me as I believe, truly believe that when we accept one another for who we truly are, that is when true love blossoms.
This is astoundingly beautiful and if anyone suggests change, ignore them!
Wendy
Comment Written 11-Jul-2019
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Thank you very much for this wonderful and very encouraging review, much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from Dorothy Farrell
Hi Kahpot, this is a lovely entry to the contest. These short forms are not easy, especially trying to get a message across. You have done well with this one. Good Luck - Dorothy
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Hi Kahpot, this is a lovely entry to the contest. These short forms are not easy, especially trying to get a message across. You have done well with this one. Good Luck - Dorothy
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Thank you very much for this wonderful review****kahpot
Comment from Boogienights
Your lovely words are so true. It is what love is all about. So few words used and yet, you have captured this emotion perfectly. Best of luck in the contest.
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Your lovely words are so true. It is what love is all about. So few words used and yet, you have captured this emotion perfectly. Best of luck in the contest.
Comment Written 11-Jul-2019
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Thank you for this wonderful review****kahpot
