Boardwalk Romance
Falling in love in Atlantic City...16 total reviews
Comment from susand3022
So sweet ... I want to be on the midway here. Where's the man whose going to cover me in cotton candy kisses??? Have you got a pill I can drop in my man's drink? ð???
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2019
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So sweet ... I want to be on the midway here. Where's the man whose going to cover me in cotton candy kisses??? Have you got a pill I can drop in my man's drink? ð???
Comment Written 11-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2019
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Oh, yeah! In my dreams, though, I get to eat the cotton candy first and then we'll do the kissin' thing -- gotta have my priorities, ya know? :) ;) Guess I need to look into a supply of pills... lol!! ;) ;) In m y dreams, I didn't need one!! ;) ;) Yvette
Comment from Gail Denham
I like that last line, "your heart the midway prize" - what a lovely thought. We used to love to wander the fair (it was a couple blocks from our house back then) - what great fun to wander with a group of friends. Sometimes a boyfriend. Altho can't recall a boy winning me a prize, that's for sure.
Your poem wins a prize - nicely
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2019
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I like that last line, "your heart the midway prize" - what a lovely thought. We used to love to wander the fair (it was a couple blocks from our house back then) - what great fun to wander with a group of friends. Sometimes a boyfriend. Altho can't recall a boy winning me a prize, that's for sure.
Your poem wins a prize - nicely
Comment Written 11-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2019
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So glad you enjoyed this one, Gail -- it was a fun contest!! ;) ;) Take care! ;) Yvette
*Sorry behind on replies?slowly catching up life this weekend ?.can you say ?no time on computer? lately?.LOL!
Comment from Jeffrey L. Michaux
This is beautiful, clever, romantic, and well thought out. I like the superb way that you rhymed skies and prize. Cotton candy kisses is an excellent way to describe some tender, sweet kisses. I like this and enjoyed reading this well written work. Well done.
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2019
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This is beautiful, clever, romantic, and well thought out. I like the superb way that you rhymed skies and prize. Cotton candy kisses is an excellent way to describe some tender, sweet kisses. I like this and enjoyed reading this well written work. Well done.
Comment Written 10-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2019
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Wow! Thank you very much for your wonderful and detailed review!!
Comment from Janice Canerdy
This concise (as required by prompt) poem is very lovely and well-written.
You have made excellent use of colorful expressions, and the alliteration enhances the overall effect of the piece.
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2019
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This concise (as required by prompt) poem is very lovely and well-written.
You have made excellent use of colorful expressions, and the alliteration enhances the overall effect of the piece.
Comment Written 10-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2019
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Thank you for such a lovely review!!
Comment from dragonpoet
This is a short and simple love poem using a lot of alliteration to show how deep the feelings are.
Hope it did well in the prompt.
Keep writing.
dragonpoet
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2019
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This is a short and simple love poem using a lot of alliteration to show how deep the feelings are.
Hope it did well in the prompt.
Keep writing.
dragonpoet
Comment Written 10-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2019
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Thank you for your review!
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My pleasure.
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Comment from Richard J
Fifteen words right on the spot, and rhyming, no less.
What an attractive presentation, and how creative to make the cotton candy line just the right color, too, and highlighted by your perfect picture choice.
If this doesn't do well, the judges need new glasses.
Thank you ever-so gratefully for sharing! ~ Richard : )
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2019
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Fifteen words right on the spot, and rhyming, no less.
What an attractive presentation, and how creative to make the cotton candy line just the right color, too, and highlighted by your perfect picture choice.
If this doesn't do well, the judges need new glasses.
Thank you ever-so gratefully for sharing! ~ Richard : )
Comment Written 10-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2019
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My sincerest thanks for your wonderfully gracious review! Take care!
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I am proud to be one of your lucky reviewers. : )
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written love poem. Sometimes people make no secret of their feelings towards one another in public and the world can see the love and romance before them blossom.
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2019
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A very well-written love poem. Sometimes people make no secret of their feelings towards one another in public and the world can see the love and romance before them blossom.
Comment Written 10-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2019
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Thank you so very much for your review!
Comment from Michele Harber
This is such a perfect poem. The sentiment is charming and romantic, and it's expressed in superb poetic form, using rhyme and alliteration. The photo and color scheme complement it beautifully. Between the content and layout, I found it hard to believe this was only a 15-word poem. You've done an excellent job!
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2019
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This is such a perfect poem. The sentiment is charming and romantic, and it's expressed in superb poetic form, using rhyme and alliteration. The photo and color scheme complement it beautifully. Between the content and layout, I found it hard to believe this was only a 15-word poem. You've done an excellent job!
Comment Written 10-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2019
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Hooray!! Oh My Goodness, Michele, you just made my day!! I am a simple romantic....not all the heavy words and thoughts -- those little things mean so very much! Thank you for such a lovely review!!
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You're very welcome. I didn't even mention your lovely use of metaphor. FYI, I have an entry in the contest as well, but I voted for your poem over my own. I felt mine was good, but yours was better.
Comment from Bill Pinder
Excellent love poem entry about the experience of genuine love at Atlantic City, New Jersey. I have heard about it but never been there. Brings up memories of cotton candy.
Bill
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2019
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Excellent love poem entry about the experience of genuine love at Atlantic City, New Jersey. I have heard about it but never been there. Brings up memories of cotton candy.
Bill
Comment Written 10-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2019
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Thank you for your
Wonderful review!
Comment from Six-Star Writer
Nice thoughts but far to sappy and cliche for my tastes. I don't think romantic poems should be so blunt, but much more subtle and cleverly crafted. There should be more down to earth and description used. Something far more realistic and relatable to everyday life.
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2019
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Nice thoughts but far to sappy and cliche for my tastes. I don't think romantic poems should be so blunt, but much more subtle and cleverly crafted. There should be more down to earth and description used. Something far more realistic and relatable to everyday life.
Comment Written 10-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2019
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