Comment from Joy Graham

Excellent

Dear Mystery Poet,

You have described a love quite well in only 15 words or less. I wonder if you meant to say quiet instead of quite? That word just doesn't work for me either way. Not sure what you mean there. I like your second line very much. It gives a terrific visual.

Best wishes in the contest.

Joy xx

 Comment Written 09-Jul-2019

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reply by the author on 09-Jul-2019

Thanks Joy, correction noted

Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear

Excellent

She knows it well, how to keep, maintain, manage and foster love relation, even if sometime life drops you into crevices; well said, well done. Liked and enjoyed the read. Write-Inspire --DR ALCREATOR

 Comment Written 09-Jul-2019

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reply by the author on 09-Jul-2019

I appreciate your comments...

Comment from Robert Zimmerman

Excellent

Hello Mystery Writer. I understand the sentiments of the poem but I think you might want to check "my quite days" because I think you meant to type "quiet days."

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 Comment Written 09-Jul-2019

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reply by the author on 09-Jul-2019

Correction noted, thanks

reply by Robert Zimmerman on 09-Jul-2019

You're welcome.