She Does It Well
A wife who knows the moods and soothes43 total reviews
Comment from June Sargent
It is a gift that not everyone has - the ability to soothe. And if you have found the person who can calm the rough seas in your life - she's a keeper! A lovely entry in the contest.
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It is a gift that not everyone has - the ability to soothe. And if you have found the person who can calm the rough seas in your life - she's a keeper! A lovely entry in the contest.
Comment Written 10-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2019
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Thank you for time and comments.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written fifteen words to describe a perfect lover that manage all your shortcomings and still can say they love you without being a good liar, is definitely true lover.
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A very well-written fifteen words to describe a perfect lover that manage all your shortcomings and still can say they love you without being a good liar, is definitely true lover.
Comment Written 10-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2019
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Thank you
Comment from poetwatch
You're a fortunate person to have someone in your life that cares for you and takes care of you. In this life many couples just seem to care for number one and that's not their partner in life. This is a good entry for the Love Poem of 15 words or less. Thank you for sharing.
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You're a fortunate person to have someone in your life that cares for you and takes care of you. In this life many couples just seem to care for number one and that's not their partner in life. This is a good entry for the Love Poem of 15 words or less. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 09-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2019
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Thank you, I am fortunate indeed.
Comment from Cindy Warren
Sounds like you're a lucky guy. She's a keeper. Not everyone gets someone who sticks with them trough thick and thin. Good luck in the contest.
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Sounds like you're a lucky guy. She's a keeper. Not everyone gets someone who sticks with them trough thick and thin. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 09-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2019
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Yes indeed, thank you.
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Very intriguing artwork.
-You have used your
15 words well.
-Effective internal rhyme
in line one and good images.
-In a few words you show how
important this person is to you,
no matter the mood, silly,
quiet, or otherwise.
-The last line is very good, too.
-Good luck in the contest.
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reply by the author on 10-Jul-2019
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-Very intriguing artwork.
-You have used your
15 words well.
-Effective internal rhyme
in line one and good images.
-In a few words you show how
important this person is to you,
no matter the mood, silly,
quiet, or otherwise.
-The last line is very good, too.
-Good luck in the contest.
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Comment Written 09-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2019
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Thank you!
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You are welcome.
Comment from kahpot
Now that is Love, very well said a partner that can pick you up when you are down is a love worth having, excellent poem, best wishes for your contest****kahpot
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Now that is Love, very well said a partner that can pick you up when you are down is a love worth having, excellent poem, best wishes for your contest****kahpot
Comment Written 09-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2019
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Thank you.
Comment from Mark D. R.
Incredible that your poem portrays such a romantic love story, which may also have a sad ending.
Your heart-spiraled illustration is a nice accompaniment to your words.
Best wishes for your contest entry.
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2019
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Incredible that your poem portrays such a romantic love story, which may also have a sad ending.
Your heart-spiraled illustration is a nice accompaniment to your words.
Best wishes for your contest entry.
Comment Written 09-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2019
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Thank you very much.
Comment from royowen
I think my wife has been like that most of our married life, but she's stayed by my life no matter my faults and failings, that's the best love of all, one can overcome most things, with that kind of love, well done, good luck, a great entry in this contest, blesskngs, Roy
Typo : my (quite) days. Quiet?
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2019
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I think my wife has been like that most of our married life, but she's stayed by my life no matter my faults and failings, that's the best love of all, one can overcome most things, with that kind of love, well done, good luck, a great entry in this contest, blesskngs, Roy
Typo : my (quite) days. Quiet?
Comment Written 09-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2019
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Thanks Roy, correction noted.
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Good job,
Comment from Bill Schott
This love poem, She Does It Well, reveals in this couplet that the other does what's needed to make the relationship work.
I found this: my (quiet) days
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This love poem, She Does It Well, reveals in this couplet that the other does what's needed to make the relationship work.
I found this: my (quiet) days
Comment Written 09-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2019
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Thank you, correction noted.
Comment from Sheridan1
Wow. This poem shows the speaker as 'managed' as taking on someone else's idea of the value of their 'ways' when actually the speaker feels deeply about life. This can be with relief or not - it is up to the reader and their experience.
An important spelling error there, I believe.
The poet challenges the reader about how they think about freedom to be themselves in a relationship. Useful.
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Wow. This poem shows the speaker as 'managed' as taking on someone else's idea of the value of their 'ways' when actually the speaker feels deeply about life. This can be with relief or not - it is up to the reader and their experience.
An important spelling error there, I believe.
The poet challenges the reader about how they think about freedom to be themselves in a relationship. Useful.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 09-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2019
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I thank you and correction noted
