Comment from Brenda Henderson

Excellent

Wow! Beautifully written. My guess is from the sound of this; You probably already are! Thank you for sharing this wonderfully romantic and inspiring piece. You can definitely feel the love in this poem. She's one very lucky lady! Good luck in the contest!

 Comment Written 09-Jul-2019

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reply by the author on 10-Jul-2019

Thank you for taking the time to review my wee poem.

Actually, I'm a convinced single but I like to write about tormented love stories where one loves in secret or the person doesn't correspond to someone's love ..or someone's love has died or left.

reply by Brenda Henderson on 10-Jul-2019

Oh okay. You're welcome.

Comment from Ed2039

Good

Short and sweet, very wistful and yet hopeful, while at the same time tragically searching to find your way. Enjoyed the short read and the art work. .

 Comment Written 09-Jul-2019

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reply by the author on 10-Jul-2019

I had this wee poem in my notebook for a while ..Usually, the contest requires 10 or 15 words exactly; I was always missing or over by two/ three words. I was lucky this time.

Thank you for the positive review.

I seem to have always a subtle sadness in what I write. I love sad endings in films. I think there is more tragedy than happiness in life.