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Viewing comments for Chapter 20 "Four Miracles, Forty Minutes "
A Collection of Heart Felt Poetry.

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Comment from susand3022
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Hi Ricky, This is truly a thought-provoking poem with a positive message for anyone who is or may feel as if they are going through a dark time in their life. Well done :)

 Comment Written 12-Jul-2019


reply by the author on 12-Jul-2019
    Thanks for your time in review Susan I've learned in my present situation as I am hospitalized and I've been there for a week but I have contracted Mercer that basically that's what my cellulitis started out as I'm writing about it and moving forward with this trying to basically eradicated from my system dr. Ricci 1024 look for more on this with my poem entitled the hiccup
Comment from Tpa
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it flows beautifully as I read through it and the punctuation (or purposeful lack of) keeps me at the rhythm that I know the author intended for me. I also pay particular attention to the presentation of it. Since there are usually fewer letters and words than a story or article, I place great importance on the spacing, placement and actual choice of letters and words.



 Comment Written 10-Jul-2019


reply by the author on 11-Jul-2019
    Thanks.
    Me too.
    Doctor Ricky 1024
Comment from JLR
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Well dear writer, those who have the anchor of faith in what ever shade it comes to someone, it is lasting reminder that we truly never walk these tattered, often well worn pathways of life alone! Miracles happen, people everyday can even be the miracle that someone is seeking just to survive just one more day.. good luck on your work.

 Comment Written 10-Jul-2019


reply by the author on 10-Jul-2019
    Thanks for checking in to chapter 20 in my book consumption and giving me support on this piece about the mirror was it has been a long time brewing whether or not I should put something so personal out on the internet for people to enjoy and from the results on getting that actually help somebody I guess it was the right decision dr. Ricky 1024
Comment from Brenda Henderson
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Thank you for sharing this and for sharing the stories of others who benefited from the program you described here. You have also included information on the programs. No doubt this offering may become the catalyst for someone somewhere to obtain much needed counsel and assistance. Art should also where possible enlighten and inspire. You have succeeded in both. Well written.Well Done!

 Comment Written 10-Jul-2019


reply by the author on 10-Jul-2019
    thanks Brenda took me years to decide whether to post this cuz it was very personable but from the looks of my reviews it was unimportant and correct decision talk to Ricky 1024
Comment from Y. M. Roger
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This is such a heartfelt and praiseworthy 'nod' to the workers up there at the Center in Jersey, but to the end where it turns from 'nod' to 'cheers' for the happy cure of the lady's cancer!! ;) ;) Bright and sunshiny -- thank you for sharing! ;) ;) Yvette

 Comment Written 09-Jul-2019


reply by the author on 09-Jul-2019
    I am at this has been a close and personal issue for me for years of whether or not the post it because of that fact that the Miracles were involved and it was a little bit personal but enough time has passed and I feel people needed to read it thanks for your time and review.
    Ricky
Comment from Mystic Angel 7777
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Praise God and His goodness! This is really an uplifting and inspiring piece, Ricky! I thoroughly enjoyed it and could not help but think of "where ever two or more of you are gathered in His name, there is love, there is love". Well done and thank you very much for sharing it.

 Comment Written 09-Jul-2019


reply by the author on 09-Jul-2019
    Cuz I gather my words they come not from me as I cast them on paper it's a record you see and then as I share them they're both an offering from he and me.
    Thanks,
    Ricky