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Comment from dovemarie
Dear Ricky, It sounds like you are talking about yourself and your losses, yet using the pronoun "she" to describe the star. I love your books, and the pictures that you choose to go with them. Again, I am sorry about Jason and Carolyn. Dove
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2019
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Dear Ricky, It sounds like you are talking about yourself and your losses, yet using the pronoun "she" to describe the star. I love your books, and the pictures that you choose to go with them. Again, I am sorry about Jason and Carolyn. Dove
Comment Written 12-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2019
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Always nice to hear from a beautiful dove and whether it's seven or eight hundred I'm lost track now when it comes to my writings what matters the most is that we have an outlet to share them with like you
Comment from Darlene Franklin
A star that streaks across a sky can still cry--Yes, cry, Ricky, cry! Oh, what unimaginable pain you must be bearing! Thank you for reaching with poetry.
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2019
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A star that streaks across a sky can still cry--Yes, cry, Ricky, cry! Oh, what unimaginable pain you must be bearing! Thank you for reaching with poetry.
Comment Written 09-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2019
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Glad you were enthrillred.
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Comment from Mystic Angel 7777
Your opening two stanzas are simply stunning, Ricky. The evoke deep emotion the reader and draw them further into the poem, as well as the writer's passion. Well done and thank you very much for sharing it.
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2019
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Your opening two stanzas are simply stunning, Ricky. The evoke deep emotion the reader and draw them further into the poem, as well as the writer's passion. Well done and thank you very much for sharing it.
Comment Written 09-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2019
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anything celestial from stars to the sun to the moon glow are all special to me I love riding it thanks for your time again dr. Ricky 1024
