One More Broken Song
Leaving on a jet train...13 total reviews
Comment from Janice Canerdy
Your skillfully-written song lyrics are moving and soul-baring, making
excellent use of specific descriptions to reveal loneliness and need for
a show of love from the one addressed.
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2019
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Your skillfully-written song lyrics are moving and soul-baring, making
excellent use of specific descriptions to reveal loneliness and need for
a show of love from the one addressed.
Comment Written 07-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2019
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Thank you for your beautiful review! There were some drinking issues and I made a choice to go into the service at 18 even though it broke my heart to do so. Many miles since those days have past and we are now very dear friends.
Comment from bob cullen
This sounds like a Nashville song waiting to find a singer. I particularly loved the chorus. I wish you luck. Do you also sing your songs? Or do you have a voice like mine. I make Shel Silverstein sound like a tenor.
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reply by the author on 07-Jul-2019
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This sounds like a Nashville song waiting to find a singer. I particularly loved the chorus. I wish you luck. Do you also sing your songs? Or do you have a voice like mine. I make Shel Silverstein sound like a tenor.
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Comment Written 07-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2019
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LoL! That?s too funny because I was thinking tonight what a great country song it would make! Haha!! Unfortunately my days of singing soprano are long gone! Thank you so much for your precious review! I wish they gave us more reviewer nominations as mine are all gone for now :(. You are so deserving for this one!
Comment from kahpot
There is a song in these here words! a beautiful sad song, love the picture, words, and the way everything just fits, it reads and flows smoothly, have you tried singing this? an excellent presentation, best wishes for your contest****kahpot
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There is a song in these here words! a beautiful sad song, love the picture, words, and the way everything just fits, it reads and flows smoothly, have you tried singing this? an excellent presentation, best wishes for your contest****kahpot
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Comment Written 07-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2019
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Thank you so much for the awesome comment! Unfortunately my soprano singing days are long gone! I would love to find someone who could set it to music though! Appreciate you checked it out!
