Games People Play
Truth and Authenticity in Love21 total reviews
Comment from CrystieCookie999
An A for honesty. This is always good advice to girls and women. We always want to talk more than men do, in the majority of cases. I like your half rhymes of "change" and "remains."
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2019
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An A for honesty. This is always good advice to girls and women. We always want to talk more than men do, in the majority of cases. I like your half rhymes of "change" and "remains."
Comment Written 16-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2019
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Thank You!
Comment from DonandVicki
I think that men do love a challenge but there are times when a man thinks he doesn't stand a chance, he won't put out the effort. He will not want to waste the effort.
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2019
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I think that men do love a challenge but there are times when a man thinks he doesn't stand a chance, he won't put out the effort. He will not want to waste the effort.
Comment Written 16-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2019
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So very true!
Comment from Mia Twysted
That's nice. I like the message behind the piece. However, I found it a little blah when reading. It was hard to be immersed in the overall feeling of the poem as some of the lines were rushed and felt forced.
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reply by the author on 16-Jul-2019
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That's nice. I like the message behind the piece. However, I found it a little blah when reading. It was hard to be immersed in the overall feeling of the poem as some of the lines were rushed and felt forced.
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The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 16-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2019
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Thank You for sharing.
Comment from the13thpoet
Hello Brenda my friend. That was some good stuff right there, I felt your truth and authenticity through your words and I enjoyed every single one. Great job!
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2019
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Hello Brenda my friend. That was some good stuff right there, I felt your truth and authenticity through your words and I enjoyed every single one. Great job!
Comment Written 16-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2019
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Thank You! Your review is greatly appreciated!
Comment from Raul1
I like how you structured this poem. It is very easy to read and understand. I like this poem. No grammatical errors. Good luck in the contest! Excellent work!
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2019
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I like how you structured this poem. It is very easy to read and understand. I like this poem. No grammatical errors. Good luck in the contest! Excellent work!
Comment Written 14-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2019
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Thank You!
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You're welcome.
Comment from Mystic Angel 7777
This is so very true as many people end up all alone simply because they play these games and end up losing in the process. You express that wonderfully in this well penned write. Nicely done and thank you very much for sharing it.
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2019
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This is so very true as many people end up all alone simply because they play these games and end up losing in the process. You express that wonderfully in this well penned write. Nicely done and thank you very much for sharing it.
Comment Written 14-Jul-2019
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Thank You!
Comment from Lobber
Hi Brenda,
You certainly express your love in an unrelenting statement of lasting love. Your devotion comes through clearly in the poem. Let us all hope the object is deserving. - Lobber
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2019
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Hi Brenda,
You certainly express your love in an unrelenting statement of lasting love. Your devotion comes through clearly in the poem. Let us all hope the object is deserving. - Lobber
Comment Written 14-Jul-2019
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Thank You!
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
The dating game and the love struggle and the play on emotions, I remember it all and would have no time for this anymore. If you can't be honest and be yourself in a relationship then its best to move on. These days, with age, we are much more satisfied with the company and the mental connection we can make with the opposite sex, and if there is more, then we are lucky, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2019
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The dating game and the love struggle and the play on emotions, I remember it all and would have no time for this anymore. If you can't be honest and be yourself in a relationship then its best to move on. These days, with age, we are much more satisfied with the company and the mental connection we can make with the opposite sex, and if there is more, then we are lucky, love Dolly x
Comment Written 14-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2019
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Thank You Dolly! You're Right!
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written poem about the games people play in life to show love or affection to one another. When two people cannot give eual love to each other, the realtionship is doomed to fail. If one often wanders off without a word and the other is always around, it shows the one who wanders off have other interests that don't includes you.
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2019
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A very well-written poem about the games people play in life to show love or affection to one another. When two people cannot give eual love to each other, the realtionship is doomed to fail. If one often wanders off without a word and the other is always around, it shows the one who wanders off have other interests that don't includes you.
Comment Written 12-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2019
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So very true. However in healthy relationships both parties should have other interests. It gives them something to talk about when they do see each other.
Comment from Patty Palmer
A neat poem! I love the rhyme and rhythm. Makes a bouncy rhythm. Yes, while playing the dating game it sometimes gets too abstract and complicated. I certainly am glad to be way past that time in my life!
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2019
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A neat poem! I love the rhyme and rhythm. Makes a bouncy rhythm. Yes, while playing the dating game it sometimes gets too abstract and complicated. I certainly am glad to be way past that time in my life!
Comment Written 12-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2019
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You're so right!
