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This Time - That Time 3

Viewing comments for Chapter 48 " Published!!"
Third book in the time travel trilogy

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Comment from Gail Denham
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Very good - I'm so glad you had this positive experience. There are certainly a lot of talented and very nice folks on this site - and it makes it fun to come here and work on our stories/poems. Congrats.

 Comment Written 08-Jul-2019


reply by the author on 09-Jul-2019
    Thank you so much, Gail, for your lovely comments, and congrats. One of my reviewers disagreed with all I said, saying the people on FS are terrible writers, so I've blocked him, he did thank me for the 'buck'! lol. Thanks again, my friend, I really appreciate your words. :)) Sandra xx
reply by Gail Denham on 09-Jul-2019
    There are some writers I'm not all that fond of - sure - that is, they ramble on a bit - but that's what this site offers - a chance to air your views, write it all out - and I truly appreciate that. didn't know you could block folks - so far I havent' wanted to...blessings.
Comment from Six-Star Writer
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I disagree with everything you wrote in regard to your post, which isn't a story, but an advertisement. I believe most people here are terrible writers, and I will not read what they've written--published, or otherwise--if someone paid me. Thanks for the FS buck.

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 Comment Written 08-Jul-2019


reply by the author on 09-Jul-2019
    I feel so sad for you, Nought-Star-Writer, you've obviously had a terrible, unloved life. But you will go far in life, the moon comes to mind! :))
Comment from Michele Harber
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Sandra, congratulations on getting your book published! It certainly gives hope to other aspiring authors such as myself.

I love the humility you show in this essay, allowing for the fact that your writing didn't, perhaps, start at the level you'd thought, and accepting and acknowledging the advice and suggestions given by your fellow FanStory writers. It takes a strong person to say they need help, and an even stronger person to accept help when offered. You obviously have the necessary combination of talent and strength to make it in this industry, and I wish you continued success.

 Comment Written 08-Jul-2019


reply by the author on 09-Jul-2019
    Thank you! What a lovely thing to say. The people on FS are so genuine in their desire to help, I couldn't begin to thank you all enough. Even though one reviewer disagreed and said most of us on here are terrible writers! Sad, really. Thank you for the congrats, my friend, I really appreciate that, and I'm glad it's given you hope to forge ahead with your own writing. Dreams do come true! Big hugs, my friend. :)) Sandra xxx
reply by Michele Harber on 09-Jul-2019
    You're very welcome, Sandra. I've met many lovely people on this site, and benefitted from their knowledge. The one snarky reviewer you mentioned is correct in that there are several poor writers on the site, but aren't we all here so that, with the help of our fellow writers, we can get better? If we were perfect when we began, the site would be of no use to us, would it?

    Again, I wish you continued success. You're my new beacon of hope. Hugs right back, and have a lovely day.
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2019
    You are absolutely right, and I hope this beacon helps you in your journey to your own success; I'm sure you will succeed, you have the passion. xxx
reply by Michele Harber on 09-Jul-2019
    Thank you so much. As they say, from your mouth to God's ears.
Comment from doggymad1
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Firstly, congratulations on getting published. It is a long hard road and you are to be commended for your dedication.

I have to say that FS is the perfect platform to bring you back to reality, but also reach out a helping hand.

Good luck with the book
hugs
Freda

 Comment Written 08-Jul-2019


reply by the author on 08-Jul-2019
    Thank you so much, Freda, for your lovely words and good luck wishes, I'm going to need them! Lol. Big hugs, my friend. :)) Sandra xx
Comment from BeasPeas
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Hi Sandra. This is wonderful for you. You've done such a great job to achieve your dream as a published author. Although I didn't read every chapter of your story, the ones I did read showed me that you are excellent at what you do. Congratulations. Marilyn

 Comment Written 08-Jul-2019


reply by the author on 08-Jul-2019
    Thank you so much for those lovely words, Marilyn. The hard work starts now, getting it out there in its millions If I live long enough! lol. Big hugs, my friend. :) Sandra
reply by BeasPeas on 09-Jul-2019
    It will do well, Sandra. Kudos to you. Marilyn
Comment from Loren .
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So happy for you! I remember your writings a few years back and how gracious and accepting you were to hear reviews and advise. This goes to show that success and wisdom does come from iron sharpening iron. Loren

 Comment Written 08-Jul-2019


reply by the author on 08-Jul-2019
    What a lovely thing to say, Loren, I remember you too, and it's lovely to see you again. Thank you so very much for the six stars, and your sweet comments. It never hurts anyone to listen and learn, that's how we grow. I'm still listening! lol. Thank you. :)) Sandra xx
Comment from alexisleech
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I'm so proud of you, Sandra! I know it's been hard at times, but you managed to keep up the momentum and keep all your fans in suspense throughout the three books. Well done, lovely lady - I look forward to holding a copy in my hand!

Alexis xxx

 Comment Written 08-Jul-2019


reply by the author on 08-Jul-2019
    Thank you so very much, Alexis, for all those stars and for the lovely comments. I have you to thank big time, my friend, I'll never forget that. Biggest hugs! :) xxxxxx
Comment from Alex Rosel
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Congratulations!

It's always nice to hear when a FanStory member publishes a book; it's so encouraging. I wish you successful sales numbers and positive reviews on Amazon :)

I realise this piece isn't really one for critiquing, but there's one point that stared out at me:

and most likely will until I put my pen down for the very last time in the future. -- Personally, I would omit the in the future. The use of until implies it's a future event.

Here's wishing you good luck for all your future projects and ambitions :)

 Comment Written 08-Jul-2019


reply by the author on 08-Jul-2019
    Hi Alex, thank you so much for the congrats, and good luck wishes. The hard work is about to begin!
    Yes, you're right, the 'until' does imply what 'in the future' means. I've taken it out now, thank you for that, too. You've just confirmed what I said about still needing the grammar help! lol. Big hugs, my friend. :) Sandra x
Comment from Heather Knight
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Six stars for being humble and for achieving your dream. I'm so happy for you, Sandra.
Thanks so much for letting us know (though I had already read the good news on FB).

 Comment Written 08-Jul-2019


reply by the author on 08-Jul-2019
    Bless your heart, Maria, what a lovely thing to say, and to give me six stars for this is like putting the cherry on the cake. Thank you so much! (I've seen your message, lol) Big hugs, my dear friend. :) Sandra xx
Comment from JudyE
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That's wonderful news and heartiest congratulations to you. I'm sure a lot of blood,sweat, and tears have gone into getting your book published - figuratively at least. Best of luck with selling heaps of copies.

 Comment Written 08-Jul-2019


reply by the author on 08-Jul-2019
    Thank you, Judy, some sleepless nights, too! lol. But I have completed the trilogy and still can't believe it. Thanks for the good luck wishes! :)) Sandra xx