Just Say The Words
Business-Speak is different.62 total reviews
Comment from Winslow
Dear Rachelle,
Money does corrupt that is for sure. Look what it has done to politicians. BS is prevalent as you say. It is a matter of business l suppose but I to yearn for a time when words were gold.
Cheers,
Winslow
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2019
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Dear Rachelle,
Money does corrupt that is for sure. Look what it has done to politicians. BS is prevalent as you say. It is a matter of business l suppose but I to yearn for a time when words were gold.
Cheers,
Winslow
Comment Written 08-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2019
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You and me both, Winslow.
Thank you for this validating review. xo
Comment from Yuna Akil
Hi, your poem was my favorite of the day!
Thank you so much.
I think so many times in our lives we have to meddle around our words. I actually don't mind too much about how other people tone themselves, but I enjoy finding the right words to say something. How can I encourage this person? How will being blunt have the effect I want? Should I coddle my speech?
I guess I'm a writer so managing my tone and speech is like a fun hobby to me.
Cheers!
Yuna.
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2019
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Hi, your poem was my favorite of the day!
Thank you so much.
I think so many times in our lives we have to meddle around our words. I actually don't mind too much about how other people tone themselves, but I enjoy finding the right words to say something. How can I encourage this person? How will being blunt have the effect I want? Should I coddle my speech?
I guess I'm a writer so managing my tone and speech is like a fun hobby to me.
Cheers!
Yuna.
Comment Written 08-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2019
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What a perfect way of looking at it, Yuna! I bet you reach these daily challenges with panache and aplomb!
Thank you for the delightful review. xo
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Thank you for validating how I look at it! hah
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That's part of what's so fun about poetry, though, right --you can take from it what makes sense to YOU, even though it might be so different from how anyone else interprets it (or even how the poet intended it.) It's like abstract art, in a way.
And that's the extra facet I like so much about FS because you get to ask the author to clarify. (Not all do, though. I've seen many write, "It's whatever you want it to mean."
I like that we got to discuss this one. Thanks for being interested, Yuna. xo
Comment from Ulla
hahaha, Rachelle. I love this poem of yours touching a rather contentious topic. I know what youre saying. Being a cabin attendant for twenty years often takes a lot of tact and saying a lot of BS to obnoxious passengers. Actually, I got away with a lot with a big smile. I'm like your friend and tend to be blunt. I've got sympathy for both of them. Great entry and good luck. See? You got me going here! Ulla xxx
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2019
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hahaha, Rachelle. I love this poem of yours touching a rather contentious topic. I know what youre saying. Being a cabin attendant for twenty years often takes a lot of tact and saying a lot of BS to obnoxious passengers. Actually, I got away with a lot with a big smile. I'm like your friend and tend to be blunt. I've got sympathy for both of them. Great entry and good luck. See? You got me going here! Ulla xxx
Comment Written 08-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2019
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Hahaha! My husband does the "big smile" technique, too, Ulla, and gets away with SOO very much!! I'd love to see you to engaging in a conversation someday!
You're right about dealing with the public! I was a waitress after college, and my father referred to it as "a lesson in humility." [to which he added, "Something you could sorely use." ]
Anyway, thanks for the fun review. I always love your feedback. xo
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I would love to. Nothing better than a good play with words. I like your husband and father already. LOL
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They're definitely cut from the same cloth and both irresistible. xo
Comment from harmony13
Excellent Poem! The author's words are strong, interesting
and thought provoking. These words speak volumes. Yes,
business talk is different. However, I have fought it many times
because of it's lack of truth. I like the artwork you chose it
compliments the words and theme of this poem.
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2019
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Excellent Poem! The author's words are strong, interesting
and thought provoking. These words speak volumes. Yes,
business talk is different. However, I have fought it many times
because of it's lack of truth. I like the artwork you chose it
compliments the words and theme of this poem.
Comment Written 08-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2019
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Thanks, Harmony13. I appreciate all this encourageing feedback. xo
Comment from rjuselius
this is a brilliant piece of poetry dear Rachelle! I think you have captured the idea that under some circumstances you cannot be who you are.
thank you dear friend for sharing!
good luck!
blessings and a super squeeze!
Rebekka x
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2019
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this is a brilliant piece of poetry dear Rachelle! I think you have captured the idea that under some circumstances you cannot be who you are.
thank you dear friend for sharing!
good luck!
blessings and a super squeeze!
Rebekka x
Comment Written 08-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2019
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Thank you, as well!
Comment from Patty Palmer
Your poem is bouncy! The rhyme and rhythm is really good! It makes the words roll easily off the tongue as it's read aloud. I didn't see any typos or anything wrong. Good luck with the contest!
Patty
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2019
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Your poem is bouncy! The rhyme and rhythm is really good! It makes the words roll easily off the tongue as it's read aloud. I didn't see any typos or anything wrong. Good luck with the contest!
Patty
Comment Written 08-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2019
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It's like Tigger if he were a poem!
Thanks, Patty. xo
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You're welcome!
Comment from nomi338
The things some of us are willing to do for the love and need of money. Now some would say that they would never, but just stop and think of all the times you have said the words your teacher, your boss, or anyone who has ever intimidated you have forced you to not say what you really felt and you wound up saying what you felt was the safest thing to say at the time. The right word at the right time could very well save your backside, or maybe even your life.
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2019
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The things some of us are willing to do for the love and need of money. Now some would say that they would never, but just stop and think of all the times you have said the words your teacher, your boss, or anyone who has ever intimidated you have forced you to not say what you really felt and you wound up saying what you felt was the safest thing to say at the time. The right word at the right time could very well save your backside, or maybe even your life.
Comment Written 08-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2019
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Nomi, I have an entire journal dedicated to this concept!! It's entitled "What I Would Say If There Were No Repercussions." It's QUITE therapeutic!!
Thank you for the thought-provoking review! xo
Comment from misscookie
I love the artwork you choose to go with your poem, they are a perfect match you captured my attention from the first line to the last
I Can relate to the lady you see I tell it like it is. Which I have been told are to sharp... so everything time I'm asked a question.. I asked Jesus help me to use soft truthful words.
Cookie
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2019
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I love the artwork you choose to go with your poem, they are a perfect match you captured my attention from the first line to the last
I Can relate to the lady you see I tell it like it is. Which I have been told are to sharp... so everything time I'm asked a question.. I asked Jesus help me to use soft truthful words.
Cookie
Comment Written 08-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2019
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Hahaha. Oh, Miss Cookie, I just adore you!! With me, please know you don't ever have to talk to Jesus first; I'll gladly take whatever words you put out there and just quickly separate chaff from grain. It's obvious you don't have a mean bone in your body, so anything you say is never with malice. Awesome review here! xo
Comment from PeterRHW
Director, "Of course, you will have priority as you are our premier customer."
Customer, "I assume you say that to all your customers?"
Director, "Yes, of course...."
Everybody laughs and the meeting continues. (true story)
This BS is OK in business where both sides understand what is really being talked about. Undertakers talk in euphemisms, lovers croon, sailors swear and the world keeps turning.
Never mind all that, your poem is fantastic! I love the way you manage to incorporate so many great attitudes (plucky, snarky, kow tow, schmooze, etc.) without ever sounding 'wordy' - that takes a lot of skill. This domestic disturbance is underscored with great humour, both sides putting up a credible argument and, more than that, it's oh so true.
I do enjoy it when a get to read excellent poetry, thank you Rachelle.
Best wishes, Peter
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2019
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Director, "Of course, you will have priority as you are our premier customer."
Customer, "I assume you say that to all your customers?"
Director, "Yes, of course...."
Everybody laughs and the meeting continues. (true story)
This BS is OK in business where both sides understand what is really being talked about. Undertakers talk in euphemisms, lovers croon, sailors swear and the world keeps turning.
Never mind all that, your poem is fantastic! I love the way you manage to incorporate so many great attitudes (plucky, snarky, kow tow, schmooze, etc.) without ever sounding 'wordy' - that takes a lot of skill. This domestic disturbance is underscored with great humour, both sides putting up a credible argument and, more than that, it's oh so true.
I do enjoy it when a get to read excellent poetry, thank you Rachelle.
Best wishes, Peter
Comment Written 07-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2019
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Why, Peter! You have just made my night! Thank you for this fabulous review. xo
Comment from Darlene BoClair
At first I did not understand what this writing prompt was about, yet I read the guidelines. It's so funny to know in the business world and the spouse world that words have so meaning different meanings. Indeed, it's only words is not just words. Words truly determine the behavior at any given time. I like that your poem speaks on the differences.
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2019
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At first I did not understand what this writing prompt was about, yet I read the guidelines. It's so funny to know in the business world and the spouse world that words have so meaning different meanings. Indeed, it's only words is not just words. Words truly determine the behavior at any given time. I like that your poem speaks on the differences.
Comment Written 07-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2019
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Exactly! Different life circumstances = Different syntax, I guess. (I'm glad I'm not a businessman!!)
Thank you for the review, Darlene. xo
