Scene at a Hypnotist Act Part 1
Pons and Ned meet at a hypnotist act.17 total reviews
Comment from Mystic Angel 7777
LMAO! I keep envisioning these two, one chasing the other around just to get a whiff. I guess it would be pretty unnerving to wake up and have your buddy treat you like a bitch in heat that he's after. Well done and thank you very much for sharing it.
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2019
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LMAO! I keep envisioning these two, one chasing the other around just to get a whiff. I guess it would be pretty unnerving to wake up and have your buddy treat you like a bitch in heat that he's after. Well done and thank you very much for sharing it.
Comment Written 08-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2019
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Thanks, MA, for the kind review. Bill
Comment from Phyllis Stewart
Very clever performance. I like the suggestion the hypnotist gave the cousins, causing them to circle around trying to smell and not smell. He's a good entertainer! Or YOU are. :)
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2019
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Very clever performance. I like the suggestion the hypnotist gave the cousins, causing them to circle around trying to smell and not smell. He's a good entertainer! Or YOU are. :)
Comment Written 08-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2019
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I?ve attended a few hypnotism shows and there are a few stunts that stick out for me. I?ve just peopled them with Pons and Ned.
Comment from Cindy Warren
Poor guys. I hope that suggestion doesn't last too long. Imagine thinking your cousin smells so bad it would put your nosedrills right out of the sniffin' business. And he wants to follow you around sniffin' you. That would be torture!
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2019
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Poor guys. I hope that suggestion doesn't last too long. Imagine thinking your cousin smells so bad it would put your nosedrills right out of the sniffin' business. And he wants to follow you around sniffin' you. That would be torture!
Comment Written 07-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2019
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More to come.
Comment from Darlene Franklin
This sounds like a hilarious scene, and what will it do to their friendship? A very visual scene. And the unanswered questions: what does have to do with the basic theme of the play? But I'm sure it makes sense in context.
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2019
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This sounds like a hilarious scene, and what will it do to their friendship? A very visual scene. And the unanswered questions: what does have to do with the basic theme of the play? But I'm sure it makes sense in context.
Comment Written 07-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2019
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The scenes are about their visit to this show which will be done in three scenes. It?s a one-act play.
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I'm not an expert on script writing, but I can see this working very well within a play.
Comment from kahpot
Wonderful, love the accents ( had to double take a few times) very humorous I smiled all the way and threw in a few chuckles, I liked the way you cut the entertainer to Hyp, very clever, very well written look forward to more****kahpot
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2019
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Wonderful, love the accents ( had to double take a few times) very humorous I smiled all the way and threw in a few chuckles, I liked the way you cut the entertainer to Hyp, very clever, very well written look forward to more****kahpot
Comment Written 07-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2019
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Thanks, kahpot, for the great review. Bill
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This script tells the scene about Pons and Ned meet at a hypnotist act, both talked and both went back to sleep, well said, well done. Liked and enjoyed the read. Write-Inspire --DR ALCREATOR
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reply by the author on 07-Jul-2019
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This script tells the scene about Pons and Ned meet at a hypnotist act, both talked and both went back to sleep, well said, well done. Liked and enjoyed the read. Write-Inspire --DR ALCREATOR
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Comment Written 07-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2019
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Thanks, ALD
Comment from Robert Zimmerman
Hey Bill. You cracked me up the last time and you cracked me up again. I've never been hippo-diced and don't think I want to in case Ned and Pons are there. Funny stuff. Keep em' coming. Robert
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reply by the author on 07-Jul-2019
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Hey Bill. You cracked me up the last time and you cracked me up again. I've never been hippo-diced and don't think I want to in case Ned and Pons are there. Funny stuff. Keep em' coming. Robert
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Comment Written 07-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2019
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Thanks, Robert, for the kind review. Bill
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You're welcome!
