The Interview Part 3
A second interviewer comes in to get Gunny's story.17 total reviews
Comment from kahpot
Wow! very well done I did not see that coming, I am enjoying the way you have written this work making it easy to see the characters to when they are interrupted or cut of in mid sentence, to introducing them as they enter the conversation****kahpot
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2019
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Wow! very well done I did not see that coming, I am enjoying the way you have written this work making it easy to see the characters to when they are interrupted or cut of in mid sentence, to introducing them as they enter the conversation****kahpot
Comment Written 09-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2019
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Thank you, kahpot, for the great review. Bill
Comment from Rikki66
Excellent script. Cohesive with chapters one and two. Dot is still waiting. Is TJ? ***************************************************
Rikki:)))))))))))))
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2019
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Excellent script. Cohesive with chapters one and two. Dot is still waiting. Is TJ? ***************************************************
Rikki:)))))))))))))
Comment Written 07-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2019
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Thanks, Rikki, for giving this a look. Bill
welcome
Comment from Y. M. Roger
Weeeelll....this just keeps getting creepier and creepier...why do i feel Dot is up to no good with her call to 'walk among the lilacs'.... hmmm. Thanx for sharing, Sir Bill -- look forward to the next installment! ;) :) Yvette
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2019
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Weeeelll....this just keeps getting creepier and creepier...why do i feel Dot is up to no good with her call to 'walk among the lilacs'.... hmmm. Thanx for sharing, Sir Bill -- look forward to the next installment! ;) :) Yvette
Comment Written 07-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2019
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Thank you, Yvette, for the kind review. Bill
Comment from Earl Corp
So Dot is a ghost? I didn't catch on to that until just now. Is the interview over ? It seems like there's a lot more we can learn from Gunny.
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2019
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So Dot is a ghost? I didn't catch on to that until just now. Is the interview over ? It seems like there's a lot more we can learn from Gunny.
Comment Written 06-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2019
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Coming up.
Comment from Gloria ....
I have missed the other parts of this Script, but this is written in your incredibly lean and impactful style. No wasted words and just getting right to the point without second guessing.
Excellent script Bill.
Gloria
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2019
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I have missed the other parts of this Script, but this is written in your incredibly lean and impactful style. No wasted words and just getting right to the point without second guessing.
Excellent script Bill.
Gloria
Comment Written 06-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2019
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Thanks, Gloria
Comment from Teri7
This is a very well written script you have done. I am thinking I may have missed some before this one. You used very good dialogue and very interesting characters. I enjoyed reading and reviewing this. Blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2019
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This is a very well written script you have done. I am thinking I may have missed some before this one. You used very good dialogue and very interesting characters. I enjoyed reading and reviewing this. Blessings, Teri
Comment Written 06-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2019
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Thanks, Teri
Comment from Ulla
Uh, Dear, I don't know whether to laugh or cry. I think at the moment I'm doing both. Oh dear. So he strangled him there and then. I think I would have been inclined to do the same. Great story, Bill. All the best. Ulla:)))
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2019
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Uh, Dear, I don't know whether to laugh or cry. I think at the moment I'm doing both. Oh dear. So he strangled him there and then. I think I would have been inclined to do the same. Great story, Bill. All the best. Ulla:)))
Comment Written 06-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2019
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Should I add another scene?
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No I don't think think you should. I think the ending is what makes the story. Its dry humour is what appeals to me. That's of course just mu opinion.:))
Comment from judiverse
I think Bunny just got herself an exclusive. What an ending! What are you gonna do to an ex-Marine who just turned 100? We can understand Gunny's feelings after what happened. He is devastated about his brother getting his wife pregnant and being responsible for her death at the hands of an abortionist. Good idea to have the ghostly presence of Dot there. Gunny's comment that no one survived is very telling, as he must have been thinking of what he did to his brother at that time. Very interesting. judi
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2019
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I think Bunny just got herself an exclusive. What an ending! What are you gonna do to an ex-Marine who just turned 100? We can understand Gunny's feelings after what happened. He is devastated about his brother getting his wife pregnant and being responsible for her death at the hands of an abortionist. Good idea to have the ghostly presence of Dot there. Gunny's comment that no one survived is very telling, as he must have been thinking of what he did to his brother at that time. Very interesting. judi
Comment Written 06-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2019
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I was thinking of one more scene, or is it done?
Comment from Phyllis Stewart
I can't really blame him. He must have been in a state of grief and anger, not to mention betrayal. Maybe he regretted it later, maybe he didn't, but I understand why he did it.
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2019
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I can't really blame him. He must have been in a state of grief and anger, not to mention betrayal. Maybe he regretted it later, maybe he didn't, but I understand why he did it.
Comment Written 06-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2019
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I think we have at least one more scene to go.
Comment from brenda faye curtis
A perfect end to this section! I get kind of tired of people holding back and not saying what they really think or what they really did cause they're afraid they'll look bad. To strangle him on the spot is the appropriate reaction!
Love it!
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2019
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A perfect end to this section! I get kind of tired of people holding back and not saying what they really think or what they really did cause they're afraid they'll look bad. To strangle him on the spot is the appropriate reaction!
Love it!
Comment Written 06-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2019
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Thank you, Brenda, for the great review. Bill
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You're most welcome, Bill.
