Of Myths and Legends
Viewing comments for Chapter 3 "Fire Withheld"A collection of things mystical.
3 total reviews
Comment from Rachelle Allen
Talk about finding friendship in the unlikeliest of places!! This was a charming tale, and I could see it being a children's book. Very memorable piece, indeed. I hope it does well for you in the contest! xo
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2019
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Talk about finding friendship in the unlikeliest of places!! This was a charming tale, and I could see it being a children's book. Very memorable piece, indeed. I hope it does well for you in the contest! xo
Comment Written 06-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2019
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Thank you ever so much for the comments, the wishes for the contest and the suggestion! Maybe one day I'll get together a children's book of poems. Anyway, your review means so much!
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I'm glad about that. xo
Comment from RodG
I like how you set the scene on a cold day as a knight in armor walking on ice (that seems totally unlikely to me) until he finds a cave surprisingly warm with a friendly dragon. Young readers will likely enjoy this yarn which employs successfully all the prompt's required words. But I found your rhymes too often forced.
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2019
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I like how you set the scene on a cold day as a knight in armor walking on ice (that seems totally unlikely to me) until he finds a cave surprisingly warm with a friendly dragon. Young readers will likely enjoy this yarn which employs successfully all the prompt's required words. But I found your rhymes too often forced.
Comment Written 05-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2019
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Appreciate your review and comments very much!
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
I enjoyed your contest entry, Mystery Author. Good job using the required words. I like your story and how you incorporated each word. The art is a great choice. What I really like about this is the positive way it ended--friendship with the knight and the beast rather than the knight killing the beat. Good job and thanks for sharing and best wishes. Jan
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2019
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I enjoyed your contest entry, Mystery Author. Good job using the required words. I like your story and how you incorporated each word. The art is a great choice. What I really like about this is the positive way it ended--friendship with the knight and the beast rather than the knight killing the beat. Good job and thanks for sharing and best wishes. Jan
Comment Written 05-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2019
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Thank you ever so much for the review, comments and best wishes!
