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Viewing comments for Chapter 2 "God, Thank You Again!"Dedicated, Thanks to God, God's Appreciation
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Comment from Poetofheart2013
Wow what a great poem so full emotions love and gratitude.
And full of life .I really enjoyed reading it
You a wonderful job writing it just keep the good work!!!
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Wow what a great poem so full emotions love and gratitude.
And full of life .I really enjoyed reading it
You a wonderful job writing it just keep the good work!!!
Comment Written 06-Jul-2019
Comment from Miles Connolly
*applauds* Dang no notes! If it were me I might say I took life-saving medicine instead of ate but that's just me. Looks like you've been through some hard stuff and I'm glad your seeing the light.
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*applauds* Dang no notes! If it were me I might say I took life-saving medicine instead of ate but that's just me. Looks like you've been through some hard stuff and I'm glad your seeing the light.
Comment Written 06-Jul-2019
Comment from Raul1
It is great that God has saved your life. You should be happy for what he gave you. He really helped and Thank him for that. Nice work! I like your poem. Good luck in the contest!
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It is great that God has saved your life. You should be happy for what he gave you. He really helped and Thank him for that. Nice work! I like your poem. Good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 06-Jul-2019
Comment from Benny Beeharry
Hi there is so much expressed here that breaks my heart.it sounds like a satire on the God. If it s it is your choice. This is why God gave us a free choice...choose whatever you want but make sure you can handle the consequences. I admit very few ,very very few know Him. But he has not left us destitute. He did not tell us believe in him irresponsibly ,we have to take the madication. The body is not the spirit. It is bound to drop sooner or later, but that not his fault, the the results of the choice we made. There are hundreds of people who live pass the hundreds without disease or having to eat the medication.
We need to live wisely in the web of this life.let his will be done.
Benny
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Hi there is so much expressed here that breaks my heart.it sounds like a satire on the God. If it s it is your choice. This is why God gave us a free choice...choose whatever you want but make sure you can handle the consequences. I admit very few ,very very few know Him. But he has not left us destitute. He did not tell us believe in him irresponsibly ,we have to take the madication. The body is not the spirit. It is bound to drop sooner or later, but that not his fault, the the results of the choice we made. There are hundreds of people who live pass the hundreds without disease or having to eat the medication.
We need to live wisely in the web of this life.let his will be done.
Benny
Comment Written 06-Jul-2019
Comment from djsaxon
A powerful write, DR. I am a huge fan of the acrostic form and you did not let me down. The 'ambulance chasers' among the unworthy would demand more. I am simply happy that you are healthy. Good work - DJ
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A powerful write, DR. I am a huge fan of the acrostic form and you did not let me down. The 'ambulance chasers' among the unworthy would demand more. I am simply happy that you are healthy. Good work - DJ
Comment Written 06-Jul-2019
Comment from Thomas Bowling
You have written an excellent example of a difficult style. I tried to write an acrostic poem once, but they said that LKJKFHGJR RR UJRJJJJ are not words.
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You have written an excellent example of a difficult style. I tried to write an acrostic poem once, but they said that LKJKFHGJR RR UJRJJJJ are not words.
Comment Written 05-Jul-2019
Comment from duchessofdrumborg
"God, Thank you again!", is an extremely well-written and spiritually-uplifting piece. This talented poet's work was a pleasure to both read and review. To me, this is a six, but unfortunately I only have fives left. I look forward to seeing your next post.
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"God, Thank you again!", is an extremely well-written and spiritually-uplifting piece. This talented poet's work was a pleasure to both read and review. To me, this is a six, but unfortunately I only have fives left. I look forward to seeing your next post.
Comment Written 05-Jul-2019
Comment from Aussie
Wonderful words of praise for His love and care. If we put our faith in Him, as you have said, "nothing is impossible." I have been where you were, nurses, doctors and three months in hospital. Praise Him for His love. Thanks for sharing.
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Wonderful words of praise for His love and care. If we put our faith in Him, as you have said, "nothing is impossible." I have been where you were, nurses, doctors and three months in hospital. Praise Him for His love. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 05-Jul-2019
Comment from royowen
This is a very well written and crafted acrostic, the message is sound, the promotion is generous, and God is very much relational, but a long way from man, how does one connect with Him? Well done, good job,blessings, Roy
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This is a very well written and crafted acrostic, the message is sound, the promotion is generous, and God is very much relational, but a long way from man, how does one connect with Him? Well done, good job,blessings, Roy
Comment Written 05-Jul-2019
Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
A very different acrostic, done in the style of your chosing. Repitition works in this form as it gives the creditation and force of the piece in places needed. Different but catchy
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A very different acrostic, done in the style of your chosing. Repitition works in this form as it gives the creditation and force of the piece in places needed. Different but catchy
Comment Written 05-Jul-2019
