Reviews from

The Fate of a Fox

A children's story.

2 total reviews 
Comment from Bill Pinder
Exceptional
This work has reached the exceptional level

Excellent creativity displayed in this writing about the fox and his desire to prey on what he perceived as an easy target. Great way to present the truth to help protect the week from those who would attack them.
Bill

 Comment Written 04-Jul-2019


reply by the author on 04-Jul-2019
    Thank you for the review and the six star rating.
Comment from Robert Zimmerman
Excellent
Not yet exceptional. When the exceptional rating is reached this is highlighted

That is a very good story. I liked the fox and toad conversation and fully expected a very different conclusion. I enjoyed the story. I also like the 'moral." Z

 Comment Written 04-Jul-2019


reply by the author on 04-Jul-2019
    Thank you for the review.
reply by Robert Zimmerman on 04-Jul-2019
    you're welcome