Loss in the sauce
A view of Louisiana6 total reviews
Comment from Bill Schott
This poem, Loss in the Sauce, takes the reader to the Big Easy for some tastes of the region that are compelling even as I read them. cordon bleu in my rendezvous.
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This poem, Loss in the Sauce, takes the reader to the Big Easy for some tastes of the region that are compelling even as I read them. cordon bleu in my rendezvous.
Comment Written 05-Jul-2019
Comment from Bill Pinder
That is some very creative writing that is doused with humor in the midst of the sauce. Sounds like you may have had some good Cajun grubbing on a trip. Happy holiday! Bill
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That is some very creative writing that is doused with humor in the midst of the sauce. Sounds like you may have had some good Cajun grubbing on a trip. Happy holiday! Bill
Comment Written 04-Jul-2019
Comment from JLR
A person has to have been down in the ol' Bayou to even have a
Inkling of understanding this nice little piece. It's Cajun, it's alive, it's a way of live, way of living and way of eating...and perhaps even some sipping ' cause they do
n't drink it down on the bayou...
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A person has to have been down in the ol' Bayou to even have a
Inkling of understanding this nice little piece. It's Cajun, it's alive, it's a way of live, way of living and way of eating...and perhaps even some sipping ' cause they do
n't drink it down on the bayou...
Comment Written 04-Jul-2019
Comment from Y. M. Roger
I am not sure of the meaning of 'man in a broth'...? A very interesting offering this evening of 'back home' for me... thank you for sharing. :) :)
cordon blue --> cordon bleu
by creole --> by Creole
tomayto or tomato ----> tomayto or tomahto [??]
the zydeco music --> the Zydeco music
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I am not sure of the meaning of 'man in a broth'...? A very interesting offering this evening of 'back home' for me... thank you for sharing. :) :)
cordon blue --> cordon bleu
by creole --> by Creole
tomayto or tomato ----> tomayto or tomahto [??]
the zydeco music --> the Zydeco music
Comment Written 04-Jul-2019
Comment from Mistydawn
This is a well-written, descriptive poem about all the dishes you might find on the bayou. Your great word choice takes the reader there, lets them see, smell the aromas in their mind. Great job, good luck with your contest.
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This is a well-written, descriptive poem about all the dishes you might find on the bayou. Your great word choice takes the reader there, lets them see, smell the aromas in their mind. Great job, good luck with your contest.
Comment Written 04-Jul-2019
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
Not by looks, appearance or presentation, there is a feeling of loss of sauce like a fun on dish; well said, well done. Liked and enjoyed the read. Write-Inspire --DR ALCREATOR
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Not by looks, appearance or presentation, there is a feeling of loss of sauce like a fun on dish; well said, well done. Liked and enjoyed the read. Write-Inspire --DR ALCREATOR
Comment Written 04-Jul-2019
