An Aussie Dawn
Day 4 of my Australian Road trip17 total reviews
Comment from Bill Schott
This poem, An Aussie Dawn, finds our brave explorer rising with the dawn to join the rooster and hounds as the outback awaits a walk-about. Fun days.
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2019
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This poem, An Aussie Dawn, finds our brave explorer rising with the dawn to join the rooster and hounds as the outback awaits a walk-about. Fun days.
Comment Written 05-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2019
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Hi Bill, Thanks very much and it was so nice to be up nefore everyone else and enjoy the morning light having a fantastic trip so far so much to write about More to come Cheers Christine
Comment from Janice Canerdy
Your well-written poem makes effective use of specific details to describe the sights and sounds of the morning of a much-anticipated da day 4
of a grand vacation.
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2019
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Your well-written poem makes effective use of specific details to describe the sights and sounds of the morning of a much-anticipated da day 4
of a grand vacation.
Comment Written 04-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2019
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Hi Janice, yes it was lovely to get up early and just be Thanks for reading my offering for today Cheers and Chirps Christine
Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
I can tell that you are having a smashing good time on your vacation and the words you share with us also show the love of being able to put it into a really neat form. Great aabb
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2019
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I can tell that you are having a smashing good time on your vacation and the words you share with us also show the love of being able to put it into a really neat form. Great aabb
Comment Written 04-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2019
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Hi Barb, Thanks and yes I am having a ball love being a Grey Nomad LOL travelling a seeing the sights Cheers Christine
Comment from BeasPeas
Hi Christine. These birds are super looking. What are they? Do you know? I've not seen any that look like this. I enjoyed reading your poem for day #4 and look forward to subsequent writes. Above all, have a great time and stay safe. Marilyn
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2019
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Hi Christine. These birds are super looking. What are they? Do you know? I've not seen any that look like this. I enjoyed reading your poem for day #4 and look forward to subsequent writes. Above all, have a great time and stay safe. Marilyn
Comment Written 04-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2019
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Hi Marilyn, Thanks and it was so nice to share this moment with you These birds are oir Kookaburra and have A distinct laugh ( google them up and have a listen We have them back home also Cheers Chris
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Oh, yes, Kookaburra. I have always heard of them. They look very exotic. I will definitely look them up and listen to their call. :)
Comment from nancy_e_davis
Very nice Chrissy, you start out with your early morning thoughts, what you see and hear and then tell us about your plans for the day's road trip. Well done and interesting. Have fun but be safe. Nancy:)
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2019
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Very nice Chrissy, you start out with your early morning thoughts, what you see and hear and then tell us about your plans for the day's road trip. Well done and interesting. Have fun but be safe. Nancy:)
Comment Written 04-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2019
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Hi Nancy Thanks for your review and It was a lovely morning start and ai look forward to the next ones so much to see and do cant wait Cheers Christine
Comment from aryr
I am so glad your muse is buzzing with delight Christine. You were very detailed in capturing the morning with the sounds, the sights and the senses. Once again safe travels. Oh find an opal for sure and if there is one left over I will claim it lol. Oh, I do so hope you are not the driver and trying to write lol. Enjoy
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2019
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I am so glad your muse is buzzing with delight Christine. You were very detailed in capturing the morning with the sounds, the sights and the senses. Once again safe travels. Oh find an opal for sure and if there is one left over I will claim it lol. Oh, I do so hope you are not the driver and trying to write lol. Enjoy
Comment Written 04-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2019
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Hi Ary Yes Buzzing is the way and no my husband is the driver but I do write while he bumps along and my writing is shakey but I want to capture the mood althoughthis was an early peaceful rise and ai loved being in it Cheers Chris
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Whew that's a relief with him driving as you write. I am glad you are enjoying your adventure.
Comment from Heather Knight
Great description of all the morning sounds.
Both your poem and your picture are great.
I hope you are having a good time and keep on sharing your experiences with us.
Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2019
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Great description of all the morning sounds.
Both your poem and your picture are great.
I hope you are having a good time and keep on sharing your experiences with us.
Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 04-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2019
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Hi Maria Thanks for reading and I am having a ball and trying to get much out Keep posted Cheers Christine
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written update on the progress of your tour. It is great to get up with the sun in the morning and experience the first sounds and views of a new dawn.
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2019
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A very well-written update on the progress of your tour. It is great to get up with the sun in the morning and experience the first sounds and views of a new dawn.
Comment Written 04-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2019
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Hi Sandra Thank so much and I am having so much fun and seeing some lovely sights More to come Cheers Christine
Comment from Darlene Franklin
I especially like your second stanza, both the twitter tweet and air on your arms. I might have liked this better as two poems, one about the birds, one about the continuing trip. But probably not. I enjoyed taking the road trip with you.
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2019
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I especially like your second stanza, both the twitter tweet and air on your arms. I might have liked this better as two poems, one about the birds, one about the continuing trip. But probably not. I enjoyed taking the road trip with you.
Comment Written 04-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2019
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Hi Darlene Thanks for yoir review and interest in my poem and it was lovely to feel the cool brisk air on my arms Stay tuned more to come Cheers Christine
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
So fantastic, cheering, pleasant and enjoying is the Australian road trip, Nature is sweet, full of bird songs, excellent, wonderful and charming dawn; remarkable adventure; well said, well done. Liked and enjoyed the read. Write-Inspire --DR ALCREATOR
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2019
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So fantastic, cheering, pleasant and enjoying is the Australian road trip, Nature is sweet, full of bird songs, excellent, wonderful and charming dawn; remarkable adventure; well said, well done. Liked and enjoyed the read. Write-Inspire --DR ALCREATOR
Comment Written 04-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2019
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Hi Al ,Thanks for reading and yes so mich to see and do more to come have to get writing or I will fall behind LOL Cheers Christine
