Ponderosa Girl
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Comment from JudyE
Yay! A rhyming haiku - the best kind to my uneducated palate. I would be very flattered if this were written about me. And can't help myself - should 'ponderosa' have a capital? Enjoy your 4th of July
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2019
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Yay! A rhyming haiku - the best kind to my uneducated palate. I would be very flattered if this were written about me. And can't help myself - should 'ponderosa' have a capital? Enjoy your 4th of July
Comment Written 03-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2019
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Thank you
Comment from Gail Denham
What a lovely picture - and to call her "heavenly divine" - what a nice compliment you've given this lady. Husband and I were just talking of our pines which have grown so tall if they fall they're reach the house - time to cut some. But the ponderosa are so beautiful.
Nice poem.
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2019
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What a lovely picture - and to call her "heavenly divine" - what a nice compliment you've given this lady. Husband and I were just talking of our pines which have grown so tall if they fall they're reach the house - time to cut some. But the ponderosa are so beautiful.
Nice poem.
Comment Written 03-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2019
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Thank you
Comment from Rachelle Allen
Sometimes you just live right in this life, John. Plus I bet you make her laugh constantly. Women love that! This is a delightful poem. I love it. xo
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2019
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Sometimes you just live right in this life, John. Plus I bet you make her laugh constantly. Women love that! This is a delightful poem. I love it. xo
Comment Written 03-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2019
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Thank you, wherever you are. I miss you kid. :)
Comment from Y. M. Roger
She's got that wife "take the picture, Dear!" face there... LOL! ;) ;) And she's just beautiful!! ;) :) you should have entered this into the three-liner contest coming up, John -- it's perfect! ;) ;) Thanx for sharing the smile of your wonderful woman! :) Yvette
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2019
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She's got that wife "take the picture, Dear!" face there... LOL! ;) ;) And she's just beautiful!! ;) :) you should have entered this into the three-liner contest coming up, John -- it's perfect! ;) ;) Thanx for sharing the smile of your wonderful woman! :) Yvette
Comment Written 03-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2019
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Thank you
Comment from Michele Harber
This is so sweet. You've managed to express your love beautifully, with just nine words and a picture, without ever saying the word. The warmth of your poem made me smile, and your rhyming all three lines made it that much more enjoyable to read. Well done!
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2019
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This is so sweet. You've managed to express your love beautifully, with just nine words and a picture, without ever saying the word. The warmth of your poem made me smile, and your rhyming all three lines made it that much more enjoyable to read. Well done!
Comment Written 03-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2019
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You're welcome.
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
This is a great 676 poem. Lordinajamjar. Good job with the syllable count per line. I really like the end rhymes. Your picture is super. I believe if your font had a darker color other than white, the words would show as they are embedded in the picture. Then you would not need to write them again. However, that may be your preference. Good job and thanks for sharing. Jan
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2019
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This is a great 676 poem. Lordinajamjar. Good job with the syllable count per line. I really like the end rhymes. Your picture is super. I believe if your font had a darker color other than white, the words would show as they are embedded in the picture. Then you would not need to write them again. However, that may be your preference. Good job and thanks for sharing. Jan
Comment Written 03-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2019
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Thank you
