Me First
Saying I love you.35 total reviews
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
In making a love relation, one has to begin, today both of you lovers, you say, it was you who said first; well said, well done. Liked and enjoyed the read. Write-Inspire --DR ALCREATOR
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2019
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In making a love relation, one has to begin, today both of you lovers, you say, it was you who said first; well said, well done. Liked and enjoyed the read. Write-Inspire --DR ALCREATOR
Comment Written 02-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2019
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Thank you, Doctor. It is always good to hear from you and the excellent review is always so appreciated.
Sending you my best today as always,
Sally :+)
Comment from Robert Zimmerman
Hey Sally, How can I make this 150 characters? It is a cool picture with an even cooler poem. That is inspired. Now I have to use fill words because my review is over. Z
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2019
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Hey Sally, How can I make this 150 characters? It is a cool picture with an even cooler poem. That is inspired. Now I have to use fill words because my review is over. Z
Comment Written 02-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2019
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Thank you so much for the excellent review and thoughtful review. I appreciate you, Mr. Z.
Sending you my best today as well,
Sally :+)
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You're welcome for the review and thank you for your kind words. Z
Comment from Sheridan1
You have given a picture of a relationship in 3 lines. You let the reader infer the doubt, the imaginings and the hope. After the last line you leave us waiting for the enthusiastic response which brings us back to the first two lines.
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2019
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You have given a picture of a relationship in 3 lines. You let the reader infer the doubt, the imaginings and the hope. After the last line you leave us waiting for the enthusiastic response which brings us back to the first two lines.
Comment Written 02-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2019
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Thank you so much, Sheridan. Your excellent review and kind comments mean so much. Sending you my best today as well,
Sally :+)
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written three-line poem about being the first to tell our partner that we love him and before we can say it, he says it first and you know he is the right lover.
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reply by the author on 05-Jul-2019
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A very well-written three-line poem about being the first to tell our partner that we love him and before we can say it, he says it first and you know he is the right lover.
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Comment Written 02-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2019
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Thank you, dear Sandra. I appreciate the excellent review and heartfelt comments. It means so much to me.
Sending you my best today as always,
Sally xo
Comment from Debra White
Hello Sally :)
I really enjoyed reading your poem. It is sweet and perfect.
I also love 'your' song!
Good luck in the contest.
Best wishes as always, Debra :) x
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reply by the author on 05-Jul-2019
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Hello Sally :)
I really enjoyed reading your poem. It is sweet and perfect.
I also love 'your' song!
Good luck in the contest.
Best wishes as always, Debra :) x
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Comment Written 02-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2019
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Thank you, dear Debra. As always, I appreciate the excellent review and kindest comments. It means so much.
Sending you my best today as well,
Sally xo
