Feelings of getting old
When your getting on with life what is the aim?10 total reviews
Comment from Darlene BoClair
I like the photo for our eyes can show our feelings. Feelings of death as people see us. Yet, may do not die healthy. Many are at peace leading in the same direction. I like how only two lines can get my attention on death.
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2019
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I like the photo for our eyes can show our feelings. Feelings of death as people see us. Yet, may do not die healthy. Many are at peace leading in the same direction. I like how only two lines can get my attention on death.
Comment Written 03-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2019
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Thank you much!
Comment from robyn corum
Dear Mystery Writer,
Well, I have to disagree a bit. What about those stupid kids who die in senseless car wrecks? Unfortunately, they are in perfect health when they die so horribly. I realize we all end up the same, though - as dust.
Thanks and good luck!
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2019
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Dear Mystery Writer,
Well, I have to disagree a bit. What about those stupid kids who die in senseless car wrecks? Unfortunately, they are in perfect health when they die so horribly. I realize we all end up the same, though - as dust.
Thanks and good luck!
Comment Written 03-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2019
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They regrettable have broken bodies that caused loss of life. Have a safe 4th
Comment from DeborahWrite
Dear Author,
I found your serious well-written contest entry the truth. In a few words, your thoughts tell it all. I decided to keep going as long as I am able, and I know my body is breaking down--since 30! Your/our "paradox" is troubling, and I hope I/we can enjoy the quality before it's time!
Thank you for sharing this with us. Deborah
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2019
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Dear Author,
I found your serious well-written contest entry the truth. In a few words, your thoughts tell it all. I decided to keep going as long as I am able, and I know my body is breaking down--since 30! Your/our "paradox" is troubling, and I hope I/we can enjoy the quality before it's time!
Thank you for sharing this with us. Deborah
Comment Written 03-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2019
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Thank you for your sharing, I am certain that you have had a journey of life, I appreciate your kind thoughts.
Comment from Gail Denham
However, the soul remains - and the blessing is that those who accept Jesus Christ as Saviour from their sins - their souls go to heaven to be with HIm. We're told also at the last day we'll have a body as he did after resurrection - that part makes me wonder a lot.
good job with two lines.
reply by the author on 02-Jul-2019
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However, the soul remains - and the blessing is that those who accept Jesus Christ as Saviour from their sins - their souls go to heaven to be with HIm. We're told also at the last day we'll have a body as he did after resurrection - that part makes me wonder a lot.
good job with two lines.
Comment Written 02-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 02-Jul-2019
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Thanks
Comment from Earl Corp
Getting older beats the alternative. Kudos for making a two line poem rhyme. One time as a news reporter i interviewed an 85 year old man who said if he had known hed have so many health problems hed have died when he was 75. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2019
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Getting older beats the alternative. Kudos for making a two line poem rhyme. One time as a news reporter i interviewed an 85 year old man who said if he had known hed have so many health problems hed have died when he was 75. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 01-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2019
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Roger that one! thanks Earl! Happy 4th.....
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
A clever write and play on words here, we cannot deny the inevitable, I enjoyed your words and wish you luck with the contest, I am hoping that this won't happen any time soon, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2019
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A clever write and play on words here, we cannot deny the inevitable, I enjoyed your words and wish you luck with the contest, I am hoping that this won't happen any time soon, love Dolly x
Comment Written 01-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2019
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You and I are absolutely on the same wave there... 20-30 years down the road. I?m kicking my can I hope you are as well
Comment from Mystic Angel 7777
This meets the contest requirements beautifully with a correct two line count. The content is such that it will resonate with many voters and so should do well in the booth. Good luck in the voting and thank you very much for sharing it.
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2019
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This meets the contest requirements beautifully with a correct two line count. The content is such that it will resonate with many voters and so should do well in the booth. Good luck in the voting and thank you very much for sharing it.
Comment Written 01-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2019
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My most sincere thank you....
Comment from Y. M. Roger
Quite a contemplative offering for the contest today....your chosen pic is a GREAT choice for your words on this one! ;) :) Be sure to pop back in there and eliminate the gnome graffiti from your author notes... :) ;) Thanx for sharing and best of luck at the polls! ;) ;)
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2019
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Quite a contemplative offering for the contest today....your chosen pic is a GREAT choice for your words on this one! ;) :) Be sure to pop back in there and eliminate the gnome graffiti from your author notes... :) ;) Thanx for sharing and best of luck at the polls! ;) ;)
Comment Written 01-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2019
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aha...the gnomes can be bothersome, thanks for the good set of eyes. I appreciate it always....
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written two-line poem about our lives that we live the bvest we can but at the end we are growing old and end up six-feet underground and only have remains.
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2019
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A very well-written two-line poem about our lives that we live the bvest we can but at the end we are growing old and end up six-feet underground and only have remains.
Comment Written 01-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2019
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My sincere appreciation for your time and comments...
Comment from the13thpoet
I find it so difficult to write those short poems. The less lines and syllables you have to work with is too restrictive for me. I commend anyone willing to take on that challenge. That being said, I think you did a good job with your poem. You told a complete story in two lines, and not only can many of us relate to it, you made it rhyme as well. Good Job!
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2019
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I find it so difficult to write those short poems. The less lines and syllables you have to work with is too restrictive for me. I commend anyone willing to take on that challenge. That being said, I think you did a good job with your poem. You told a complete story in two lines, and not only can many of us relate to it, you made it rhyme as well. Good Job!
Comment Written 01-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2019
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My sincere thank you! I appreciate your comments, this actually was first attempt...
