Growing My Mustard Seed
Inspiration taken from Matthew 17:204 total reviews
Comment from C. Gale Burnett
Such a wonderful contest entry! Ten exquisite lines of what faith-building is all about and the unconditional love and relationship that our Father desires.
Enjoyed the rhyme, too.
I need to look for my 44 year old charm bracelet. My first charm was a mustard seed my great grandmother gave me :)
Thank you for sharing your faith. You have a beautiful spirit.
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2019
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Such a wonderful contest entry! Ten exquisite lines of what faith-building is all about and the unconditional love and relationship that our Father desires.
Enjoyed the rhyme, too.
I need to look for my 44 year old charm bracelet. My first charm was a mustard seed my great grandmother gave me :)
Thank you for sharing your faith. You have a beautiful spirit.
Comment Written 02-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2019
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Thank you ever so much for reviewing and the comments! Very much appreciated!
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The pleasure was truly all mine :))
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
You had faith in God as friend, a tiny seed sown, later you find it like a mustard plant, your faith is grown so deep, through prayers to God; enjoyed the read, well said, well done. Write-Inspire-Change --DR ALCREATOR
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2019
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You had faith in God as friend, a tiny seed sown, later you find it like a mustard plant, your faith is grown so deep, through prayers to God; enjoyed the read, well said, well done. Write-Inspire-Change --DR ALCREATOR
Comment Written 30-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2019
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Thank you! I very much appreciate you reviewing and the comments!
Comment from Heather Knight
I like the rhyme, even if it's slightly irregular. I can't rhyme to save my life.
I also like the topic you've chosen for this poem.
Thanks for sharing and good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2019
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I like the rhyme, even if it's slightly irregular. I can't rhyme to save my life.
I also like the topic you've chosen for this poem.
Thanks for sharing and good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 30-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2019
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Thank you so much for reviewing and for the comments! Also appreciate the good luck wish!
Comment from Mystic Angel 7777
This meets the contest requirements beautifully with a strong message of faith expressed throughout. While the meter tends to be a bit ragged, the eloquence of the thoughts conveyed make up for it. Good luck in the judging and thank you very much for sharing it.
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2019
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This meets the contest requirements beautifully with a strong message of faith expressed throughout. While the meter tends to be a bit ragged, the eloquence of the thoughts conveyed make up for it. Good luck in the judging and thank you very much for sharing it.
Comment Written 30-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2019
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Thank you ever so much for reviewing and the comments, as well as the good luck wish!
