Comment from Liz O'Neill

Excellent

You have created some magnificent imagery. My favorite stanza is
Twilights magic glow
aurora borealis
strange lights in the Sea

this next stanza invites the reader to experience senses on several levels.

Deep-azure sky set
over lush, wild blackberries
laden with sweetness

The whole poem is a great sensory experience. You appeal to all senses and to the spiritual level.

Nicely written

 Comment Written 05-Jul-2019

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reply by the author on 05-Jul-2019

Thank-you for the wonderful review.

Comment from Bucketlist

Exceptional

My first 6 of the week goes to your penning. I love how you incorporate so many blessings into your poem.
The older I get, the more I appreciate the blessings that He delivers. This was a great Sunday morning read. Thank you for sharing
Hugs, Trusha

 Comment Written 30-Jun-2019

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reply by the author on 30-Jun-2019

Thank-you for My Sunday treat ~

BB

reply by Bucketlist on 30-Jun-2019

Any Sunday!

Comment from Gail Denham

Excellent

Good poem although I would have liked a more cohesive connection between the stanzas - or perhaps that was the form of the poem - not sure. anyway - some nice images.

 Comment Written 29-Jun-2019

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reply by the author on 30-Jun-2019

Thanks I appreciate your comments and yes I'm X I would rather hear but they're either didn't like about it then what they did good job

Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

Beautiful! Loved your meditation on Ecclesiastes. But your message is more uplifting than Solomon's because you focus on the joy and love of life. You give us examples from the simple things of nature, to the majestic heavenly displays and to the wonder of the human soul/spirit!

 Comment Written 29-Jun-2019

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reply by the author on 29-Jun-2019

Thanks again Helen so nice to communicate a bit more often here with Fellowship. I believe this one can be called simply "Haiku",
because they fit together.

Thanks again ~

Darren

Comment from Sylvia Page

Excellent

Badger, There are so many verses I liked these are some...
Newborn cooing soft,
mornings Songbirds dulcet notes
dancing colored flames

and... this goes well with your picture...
Twilights magic glow
aurora borealis
strange lights in the Sea
Loved it all
Sylvia

 Comment Written 29-Jun-2019

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reply by the author on 29-Jun-2019

Thanks so much Sylvia, I appreciate your comments and warm review and I really appreciate you connecting the different elements~

Blessings,

Brother Badger cull

Darren

reply by Sylvia Page on 30-Jun-2019

Happy to review Darren

Comment from royowen

Excellent

One needs a belief, there's only one belief that is really worth having, a saviour so loving that He died for the sins of the world. Including mine and yours. Well done Darren a great suite of 5/7/5s in tribute, well done, blessings, Roy

 Comment Written 29-Jun-2019

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reply by the author on 29-Jun-2019

Thanks so much Roy, I cherish your comments and fellowship here as we go stronger in our faith and put it to quill~

Blessings,

Darren

reply by royowen on 29-Jun-2019

Most welckme

reply by the author on 29-Jun-2019

I really appreciate your comments I was wondering if you could agree that this can be classified as all haiku?

reply by royowen on 29-Jun-2019

Not really Darren, some are but I think you named them correctly, nature is haiku, although humans are part too, but I think you named them correctly