Comment from Joy Graham

Excellent

Hello Mystery Poet,

This is a fun poem to read :) It is filled with wonder about our neighbor planets in the universe. Imagination and questions get us thinking and make good themes for poems.

Best wishes in this contest.

Joy xx

 Comment Written 28-Jun-2019

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reply by the author on 28-Jun-2019

Thanks. This was a fun write once I got started.

Comment from Sandra du Plessis

Excellent

A very well-written poem about the view of Venus with a little imagination and the help of the Muse we can go wherever we like and write it all on paper to make it a real dream.

 Comment Written 28-Jun-2019

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reply by the author on 28-Jun-2019

Thanks. This one was a lot of fun once I got started.

Comment from Lance S. Loria

Excellent

A fun rhyming poem with a wonder about what might be beyond earth. There is increasing evidence of UFOs so this is relevant today. No edits or adjustments necessary

 Comment Written 28-Jun-2019

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reply by the author on 28-Jun-2019

Thanks. Yes, I've seen a few eposides of Ancient Aliens and I think there's probably something out there.

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

Your imagination ran riot with this fantasy write about the stars and another world far away, most of these planets are inhabitable and hostile places, a jaunt through a hellish wonderland here, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 28-Jun-2019

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reply by the author on 28-Jun-2019

Thanks. I imagine that the creatures meant to live on those worlds are perfectly at home. LOL

Comment from Karen Luciana

Excellent

Hi,
Thank you for such a pleasant read! I find your musings about another planet creative! I really like how you also wonder how other beings might perceive Earth. Good luck with all of your wonderful writing.

 Comment Written 28-Jun-2019

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reply by the author on 28-Jun-2019

Thanks. This one was fun. Glad you enjoyed it.

Comment from Jackson77

Excellent

A great poem of the wonder of what other life may be thinking and experiencing in worlds far away from here. Lots of great images and feeling in this poem.

 Comment Written 28-Jun-2019

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reply by the author on 28-Jun-2019

Thanks. This one was a fun write.

Comment from Patty Palmer

Excellent

Quite an interesting poem. We've all looked up in the sky and wonder what is there. You went further and drew a picture in my head. Great job!
God Bless!

 Comment Written 28-Jun-2019

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reply by the author on 28-Jun-2019

Thanks. Who knows what we might find out there?

Comment from Josh Walters

Excellent

I really enjoyed this visual. I often find myself sitting without knowing what to write. Daydreaming about foreign planets with creatures looking back at us. Good luck in the contest!

 Comment Written 28-Jun-2019

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reply by the author on 28-Jun-2019

Thanks. I found myself staring out the window at Venus. This was the result.

Comment from Robert Zimmerman

Excellent

Hello mystery writer: I really like the idea of the poem. At first I was trying to make out the features of the head of the Venusian. But when I reached the last two stanzas after the S'mores roast they are looking at their sister planet wondering what's up with all the water. I like the poem.

 Comment Written 27-Jun-2019

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reply by the author on 27-Jun-2019

Thanks. It was a lot of fun to write this one.

reply by Robert Zimmerman on 27-Jun-2019

you're welcome

Comment from Suzwhitethornwhispers

Excellent

Oh yes, that moment when we, as writers, stare and ponder. It's magic, terrifying, thrilling. Our imaginations are our secret superpower. Thank you for sharing this!

 Comment Written 27-Jun-2019

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reply by the author on 27-Jun-2019

Thanks. Yes, it's a bit scary. I was staring out the window at Venus and this is what I came up with.