Comment from Hugh McDowell

Excellent

Excellent. This is an old theme that you've put fresh words to. I can relate so very well to this, as I used to star gaze and have similar "earth centered" thoughts. Excellent pace and rhyming. I especially liked the "cleared" and "weird" rhyme. Hugh

 Comment Written 29-Jun-2019

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reply by the author on 29-Jun-2019

Thanks. I was staring at a blank page and out the window at Venus. I came up with this.

Comment from Benny Beeharry

Excellent

Hi, yes we all wonder what is there there. We do not know so we wonder adding little bits of knowledge, One on top of another thinking they will add up ,like two and two.
But this s healthy thinking, a way to know.
Benny

 Comment Written 29-Jun-2019

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reply by the author on 29-Jun-2019

Thanks. Of course there's most likely nothing on Venus, but this was fun. Glad you enjoyed it.

Comment from RPSaxena

Exceptional

Hello Friend,
Nice flight of Imagination meeting the desired norms, and beautifully depicting its theme.
Matching the theme phraseology, and smooth flow throughout from the beginning to the end with lovely rhyming scheme.
Best of Luck!

 Comment Written 29-Jun-2019

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reply by the author on 29-Jun-2019

Thanks for the six! This one was a lot of fun once I got started. I was sitting staring at a blank page and out the window at Venus. This was the result.

reply by RPSaxena on 03-Jul-2019

Friend, Most Welcome!
With best wishes,
~ RP

Comment from Earl Corp

Excellent

This was a fun read, I'll bet it was fun to write. Imagining that there are beings on other planets is kind of stretch, except Mars we all know little green men live on mars. Nice job. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 29-Jun-2019

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reply by the author on 29-Jun-2019

Thanks. It was a fun write once I got started. I was sitting there staring at a blank page and out the window at Venus. Then I came up with this.

Comment from WryWriter

Excellent

Love this! The staring back at each other with imaginative minds! I like your scenario. Good artwork choice for this theme. I enjoyed reading your work!

 Comment Written 29-Jun-2019

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reply by the author on 29-Jun-2019

Thanks. Glad you enjoyed my fun little poem.

Comment from the13thpoet

Excellent

That was a nice cute little poem. I enjoyed it. The rhyming was good and the flow was good as well. I think the part I appreciated the most was the fact that you wrote from the perspective of Venus. Good job!

 Comment Written 28-Jun-2019

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reply by the author on 28-Jun-2019

Thanks. This one was a fun write. Glad you enjoyed it.

Comment from Hitcher

Excellent

I liked the way you turned your imagination around 360 degrees. First wondering what kind of life-force may inhabit such a scorching planet to the creatures themselves looking up and seeing our world and wondering what kind of life-force we would be. Nice!

 Comment Written 28-Jun-2019

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reply by the author on 28-Jun-2019

Thanks. This one was fun once I got started.

Comment from dragonpoet

Excellent

This tells up what you image aliens from Venus (Venutians?)might look like and like to do. You also muse on whether they have the same thoughts as you do,
Good luck in the contest. Keep writing
Joan

 Comment Written 28-Jun-2019

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reply by the author on 28-Jun-2019

Thanks. This one was fun. Are they Venutians or Venusians? I'm not sure.

reply by dragonpoet on 29-Jun-2019

My pleasure. That was my question. According to the internet it is Venusian or Venerian. I would go with Venusian. And we all know the internet is always right.

Joan

reply by dragonpoet on 29-Jun-2019

My pleasure. That was my question. According to the internet it is Venusian or Venerian. I would go with Venusian. And we all know the internet is always right.

Joan

reply by the author on 29-Jun-2019

Of course the internet is always right. When I brought Max home, I did some research to see if there was anything in particular I should know about his breed. I found out they'd been traded to us by aliens in exchange for Elvis. LOL In fact they're a mixture of domestic long hair and Persian.

reply by dragonpoet on 29-Jun-2019

A so Elvis still lives. Maybe the aliens can abduct some of his biggest fans to they will be happy.
Jaon

reply by the author on 29-Jun-2019

I hope he's happy. There's no way I'm going to trade back.

Comment from Miss Jane

Excellent

Thanks. I DID have fun reading this. I marvel at writers who can take something as simple as seeing a star and running with imagination to take us where most of us have pondered. Bravo! Job well done. Write some more!

 Comment Written 28-Jun-2019

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reply by the author on 28-Jun-2019

Thanks. This one was fun to write once I got started. Glad you enjoyed it.

Comment from Artasylum

Excellent

I love the upbeat feel of this verse...

I see them as much friendlier sorts
Around a volcano toasting smores
Maybe dancing and singing while building forts
In case ash and lava pours.

 Comment Written 28-Jun-2019

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reply by the author on 28-Jun-2019

Thanks. This one was fun.