Renaissance of Enchantment
Viewing comments for Chapter 22 "Chapter Six, Part 4"It was their world long before our existence...
16 total reviews
Comment from Janetsue
Wow, what an ending!
re: a small typo:
"You're probably right, Julio." She stepped in to retrieve the rather large book and looked up, only to find the old man already back outside the door again - he must definitely being (be) feeling better today.
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2020
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Wow, what an ending!
re: a small typo:
"You're probably right, Julio." She stepped in to retrieve the rather large book and looked up, only to find the old man already back outside the door again - he must definitely being (be) feeling better today.
Comment Written 26-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2020
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Thanx for the catch there, my lady... got your attention at the end of this one, did I?! ;) Yvette
Comment from thaities, Rebecca V.
"Moving forward was always best." Perfect ending to Maggie's moving out of her apartment chapter. Poor old Bongo. Cats are strange. They have a mind of their own.
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2020
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"Moving forward was always best." Perfect ending to Maggie's moving out of her apartment chapter. Poor old Bongo. Cats are strange. They have a mind of their own.
Comment Written 11-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2020
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Cats are a mess (I have two!)... ;) :)
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I prefer the outdoor kind.
Comment from poetwatch
Up in flames, Yvette. Where will the tenants live? Even those that are conjured from thin air need some love and tender care. I assume Bongo and Twilight will go where Maggie goes, for every witch needs a black cat and an owl. Those in the Refuge are in for a surprise. :) Waiting on the next one. ;)
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2019
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Up in flames, Yvette. Where will the tenants live? Even those that are conjured from thin air need some love and tender care. I assume Bongo and Twilight will go where Maggie goes, for every witch needs a black cat and an owl. Those in the Refuge are in for a surprise. :) Waiting on the next one. ;)
Comment Written 29-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2019
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LOL! You are one of my few that seem to caught on to a lot of the nuances, Jose -- so glad you're hanging in there, sir..... just don't get too attached to the witch idea.... :) ;) ;) Take care and have a great week ahead! ;) Yvette
Comment from royowen
So finally Addison and Margurite are saying goodbye to their old place of residence they had lived in for awhile. Although its fate was in the hands of fate. The fact that her beloved bongo was missing is disturbing, but according to Julio, the cat will always be her, cat and maybe not really lost. An excellent post Yvette, well done,blessjngs, Roy
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2019
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So finally Addison and Margurite are saying goodbye to their old place of residence they had lived in for awhile. Although its fate was in the hands of fate. The fact that her beloved bongo was missing is disturbing, but according to Julio, the cat will always be her, cat and maybe not really lost. An excellent post Yvette, well done,blessjngs, Roy
Comment Written 28-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2019
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Thanx so very much for hanging in there with Maggie and everyone, Roy -- your support is very important! ;) ;) Thanks for reading and the review.... we'll be in Alabama next one! ;) ;) Yvette
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Well done
Comment from Karen Luciana
Hello Again,
You are such a good storyteller. Keep posting. I enjoyed this chapter and will look forward to finding out how the story progresses. I haven't read the previous parts but plan to do so.
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2019
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Hello Again,
You are such a good storyteller. Keep posting. I enjoyed this chapter and will look forward to finding out how the story progresses. I haven't read the previous parts but plan to do so.
Comment Written 28-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2019
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Hey there!! Good to see you again --- glad you dropped by again!! ;) Know that you're welcome to drop by anytime, ma'am as the front porch always has an open chair! ;) Thanx for the review and take care! ;) ;) Yvette :)
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written chapter about the moving day that seems to worked out fine except for the missing Bongo and Mr de Julius's strange behavior. A new life awaits and that is all that matters at this stage.
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2019
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A very well-written chapter about the moving day that seems to worked out fine except for the missing Bongo and Mr de Julius's strange behavior. A new life awaits and that is all that matters at this stage.
Comment Written 27-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2019
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On their way to the South.... could be interesting! ;) :) Thanx for dropping by on this one, Sandra -- I do so appreciate your support of Maggie and the gang! ;) ;) Yvette
Comment from aryr
This was a great chapter Yvette. I liked the path that this chapter took. Maggie and Addy were finally leaving and although Bongo was not there physically I suspect as Mr. DeJesus had told her, that he was always there with them. It was an interesting twist for the end of the chapter that their former home was engulfed in flames and smoke behind them and that they knew nothing about it. Very well done.
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2019
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This was a great chapter Yvette. I liked the path that this chapter took. Maggie and Addy were finally leaving and although Bongo was not there physically I suspect as Mr. DeJesus had told her, that he was always there with them. It was an interesting twist for the end of the chapter that their former home was engulfed in flames and smoke behind them and that they knew nothing about it. Very well done.
Comment Written 27-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2019
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Thanx so very much for your review, Ali -- and I'm glad you enjoyed my 'fantasizing' again! ;) Thanx for keeping up with Maggie and the gang! ;) ;) Yvette
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You are so welcome Yvette.
Comment from robyn corum
Yvette,
Super chapter. I love, love the idea of invisible men and missing cats who aren't missing. This is all so fascinating. I can't hardly wait to see when that cat will show up and what she'll do when it does. hmmmm...
Thanks!
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2019
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Yvette,
Super chapter. I love, love the idea of invisible men and missing cats who aren't missing. This is all so fascinating. I can't hardly wait to see when that cat will show up and what she'll do when it does. hmmmm...
Thanks!
Comment Written 27-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2019
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Oh, I'm so glad you're catching some of the 'oddities' .... I have some readers that aren't and some things aren't making sense to them .... I don't want to come out and just say things as that doesn't make it as 'intriguing' so THANK YOU!! :) ;) Yvette :)
Comment from JudyE
So Maggie's old home has burnt down. I wonder what she'll think of her new one.
Just one point:
And it seemed that Stephen enjoyed the extremely nervous and, therefore, talkative Addison as much as Addy was enjoying talking to him. - I would have kept the verbs the same 'enjoyed' and 'enjoyed' rather than 'was enjoying'.
Sincerely
Judy
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2019
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So Maggie's old home has burnt down. I wonder what she'll think of her new one.
Just one point:
And it seemed that Stephen enjoyed the extremely nervous and, therefore, talkative Addison as much as Addy was enjoying talking to him. - I would have kept the verbs the same 'enjoyed' and 'enjoyed' rather than 'was enjoying'.
Sincerely
Judy
Comment Written 27-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2019
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Thank you so much!!! ;) ;)
Comment from Debbie Pope
Okay, the cat is with her and the rest of the story takes place in Allowance. Why is Stephen puzzled? Did he not see Mr. DeJesus? Don't answer that. I know that I will find out. I still think that most of the characters that I have grown to love are coming to Allowance in some form or another. I sure hope so. I'll also find out the importance of the history book.
You raised lots of issues in this chapter. I'm hooked for sure.
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2019
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Okay, the cat is with her and the rest of the story takes place in Allowance. Why is Stephen puzzled? Did he not see Mr. DeJesus? Don't answer that. I know that I will find out. I still think that most of the characters that I have grown to love are coming to Allowance in some form or another. I sure hope so. I'll also find out the importance of the history book.
You raised lots of issues in this chapter. I'm hooked for sure.
Comment Written 26-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2019
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Stephen was puzzled because.....well, go back and re-read it and pay close attention to the dialogue when Stephen and Addy walk back in (you might also want to read the chapter/part when Maggie's talking to Punky and Addy comes in...). I didn't answer you, but I pointed you (as I tell my students - LOL!). :) :) :) And I'm so glad you're hooked...wouldn't have it any other way! :) :) Thank you for those WONDERFUL stars, ma'am, and stay cool today! :) :) Yvette
