Comment from JudyE

Excellent

I love the imagery of a 'just yawning Morning Glory'. They're industrious little creatures and the thought of them all in uniform makes me smile. I don't have any suggestions to make and good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 26-Jun-2019

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reply by the author on 26-Jun-2019

Thanks much for your read and review.

Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear

Excellent

The bee performs his job, incessantly at work, so perfectly, merrily, committedly and destined as God intended; well said, well done. Write-Inspire-Change --DR ALCREATOR

 Comment Written 26-Jun-2019

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reply by the author on 26-Jun-2019

Thanks much for your read and review.

Comment from Kamisah Karim

Excellent

A clear image picturing the bees at work.I like the use of the words team player that sounded like a foot ball team because of their colours.This line too 'Throat of the yawning morning glory' because I could actually picture the flowers yawning in the early morning.Very good personafication there.Good job.
Thank you for sharing and good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 26-Jun-2019

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reply by the author on 26-Jun-2019

Thanks much for your read and review.

reply by Kamisah Karim on 26-Jun-2019

You are most welcome.

reply by Kamisah Karim on 26-Jun-2019

You are most welcome.