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My Faith You Can Renew

A faith renewal poem.

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Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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Wise words Patricia and the guilt we feel inside when we set a foot wrong can thwart our day until we have put right a wrong, I enjoyed your wise faithful words here, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 26-Jun-2019

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    Thank you for your lovely review.
Comment from JanPerry
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A stunning Bible entry poem. I love the look here with the written font face. The tense is wrong on the first two lines. "Chose to wait" is wrong. It's choose to wait. "I will find things work out great" sounds slang to me.
"But when "I've" run headlong to sin. "I find I have no peace within" sounds better. If words are unnecessary just leave them out in this case.
The rest sounds lovely and in synchronisation.

 Comment Written 26-Jun-2019

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    Thank you for your lovely review.
Comment from Joan E.
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Thank you for sharing another of your spectacularly beautiful, floral compositions and your spiritual poem. I admired your rhymed couplets and declaration of faith. Cheers- Joan

 Comment Written 26-Jun-2019

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    Thank you for your lovely review.
Comment from susand3022
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Hi Patricia, I like this faith poem a lot. I do find the fourth line to be a touch long. I think that if you remove, "I have" then you will find that it reads more smoothly and you won't lose the meaning. :)

 Comment Written 26-Jun-2019

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    Thank you for your lovely review.
Comment from the13thpoet
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That was very beautiful. Very eloquent, inspirational, and moving. The rhyme and flow good as always. A great offering from you, thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 26-Jun-2019

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    Thank you for your lovely review.
Comment from lyenochka
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Great message, Patricia! I appreciate it because I'm so impatient! I would like things to happen and pray for the Lord to provide but it's hard just to wait but that's what I'm asked to do now.

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 Comment Written 25-Jun-2019

reply by the author on 25-Jun-2019
    Thanks for your review. At times I get a little impatient with things and people, but age has diminished some of the impatience.
Comment from Irish Rain
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So true, when I keep my mind/life on the right path,
I'm at peace.
Otherwise, confusion and chaos.
Good thing though, shows my conscience is
working!!
Wonderful,
Blessings...

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 Comment Written 25-Jun-2019

reply by the author on 25-Jun-2019

    Thanks for your nice review.It is a awful thing to have a conscience that has been seared.
reply by Irish Rain on 25-Jun-2019
    Or jaded. When you go too long without the voice of God, He becomes harder to hear.
    The world gets in the way.
    Satan's intention.