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Comment from TheStoryMan
Whew! What a chapter! So much happening here. I hope Julie can get her daughter free and they get away. Jeff has done so much wrong, has committed so many crimes. I know he's doing it to save his family but...
I hope no one hurts that little girl Jeff grabbed.
reply by the author on 28-Jun-2019
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Whew! What a chapter! So much happening here. I hope Julie can get her daughter free and they get away. Jeff has done so much wrong, has committed so many crimes. I know he's doing it to save his family but...
I hope no one hurts that little girl Jeff grabbed.
Comment Written 28-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 28-Jun-2019
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Thank you for such a kind review, I'm so glad you enjoyed it. Jeff has gone through a lot for his family that's for sure. Poor Julie has to face invaders alone for the second time.
Thank you again for your review it means a lot to me, take care.
Comment from Ulla
Hi Misty, there's a lot going on in this chapter and I think you've written it very well. You certainly know how to make a story come to life and including a lot of suspense. All the best. Ulla:)))
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2019
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Hi Misty, there's a lot going on in this chapter and I think you've written it very well. You certainly know how to make a story come to life and including a lot of suspense. All the best. Ulla:)))
Comment Written 25-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2019
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Thank you for your kind review I am so glad you enjoyed it. I still have a long ways to go with the description, but I'm working on it.
Thank you again for all your help, support and friendship, take care.
Comment from way2gokevs
A lively and interesting tale you have penned, a lot of off-shoots to different parts and the scene keeps evolving....................
Thanks for sharing, cheers, Kev
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2019
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A lively and interesting tale you have penned, a lot of off-shoots to different parts and the scene keeps evolving....................
Thanks for sharing, cheers, Kev
Comment Written 25-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2019
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Thank you so much for your terrific review, I'm so glad you enjoyed it. The Donaldsons have found themselves in horrid circumstances. Hopefully, they will make it out alive.
Thank you again for your wonderful review, take care.
Comment from Phyllis Stewart
Wow! This is really good. You should post more often. I hate waiting to see what happens next. You're a terrific writer. I have nothing to add, but I have to type the required number of words, s I'll just say wow, wow, wow, and bravo! :)
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2019
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Wow! This is really good. You should post more often. I hate waiting to see what happens next. You're a terrific writer. I have nothing to add, but I have to type the required number of words, s I'll just say wow, wow, wow, and bravo! :)
Comment Written 24-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2019
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Thank you so much for such an excellent review and your fabulous six-stars I am honored. Thank you for your compliment, that means a lot coming from you.
Thank you again for all your support, encouragement and friendship, it means the world to me, take care.
PS. I'm going to order your book payday. Our budget was pushed to the limit this time. I plan to leave an excellent review as well.
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Thanks. I'm honored, truly. Big hug!
{{{Misty}}}
Comment from Brenda Henderson
Excellent crime story. This is a compelling story with great rhythm and exquisite pace. I was on the edge of my seat. I saw what might be a typo at the beginning, a "t" but that could have been intentional and not enough to merit a deduction. Well written, action packed narrative. This is something I would definitely want to see. Solid work!
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2019
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Excellent crime story. This is a compelling story with great rhythm and exquisite pace. I was on the edge of my seat. I saw what might be a typo at the beginning, a "t" but that could have been intentional and not enough to merit a deduction. Well written, action packed narrative. This is something I would definitely want to see. Solid work!
Comment Written 24-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2019
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Thank you so much for such a fabulous review I'm so glad you enjoyed it. It'd be great if it did make it to the big screen. It would be fairly simple to switch to script format if the occasion ever occurred.
Thank you again for your excellent review, all your encouragement and support, take care.
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You're Welcome!
Comment from royowen
There's lots going on in this episode, and your character Julie, has more spine than hubby Jeff, who seems to be an abject idiot, now kidnapping a little girl, I know he would never hurt her, but still... Opening with that goon Martin killed in a car crash. And now Julia defending herself and her child, by disposing of the two goons. Well done, good episode, blessings Roy
Typo : His thread (thread barren) threadbare?
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2019
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There's lots going on in this episode, and your character Julie, has more spine than hubby Jeff, who seems to be an abject idiot, now kidnapping a little girl, I know he would never hurt her, but still... Opening with that goon Martin killed in a car crash. And now Julia defending herself and her child, by disposing of the two goons. Well done, good episode, blessings Roy
Typo : His thread (thread barren) threadbare?
Comment Written 24-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2019
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Thank you so much for such a grand review, I'm so glad you enjoyed it. Thank you for catching my mistake. We know who wears the pants in that family, hehehe. Hopefully, Julie can keep her children safe.
Thank you again for such a great review, all your help, support, and friendship, take care.
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Well done
