Another of Life's Puzzles
A teeny tiny rhymed poem18 total reviews
Comment from tfawcus
The answer is simple really: "what a tangled web we weave when first we practise to deceive!"
...and these artful little arachnids are practising to deceive.
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2019
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The answer is simple really: "what a tangled web we weave when first we practise to deceive!"
...and these artful little arachnids are practising to deceive.
Comment Written 24-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2019
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Ah! That's why!! Thanks for clearing that up, Tony! Best wishes as always, Debra :)
Comment from robyn corum
Debra,
This was such fun. I can relate to the walking into invisible webs things - I'm sure most people can. That made this poem even more fun. Thanks for the smile!
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2019
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Debra,
This was such fun. I can relate to the walking into invisible webs things - I'm sure most people can. That made this poem even more fun. Thanks for the smile!
Comment Written 24-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2019
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Thank you for your lovely feedback, Robyn :) Best wishes, Debra
Comment from Thomas Bowling
If you have a fear of spiders, I think I can help. Imagine that you're sleeping and a big spider crawls across your face. While it does she lays eggs in your tear ducts. In three weeks, thousands of baby spiders crawl out of your eyes. Fell better now?
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2019
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If you have a fear of spiders, I think I can help. Imagine that you're sleeping and a big spider crawls across your face. While it does she lays eggs in your tear ducts. In three weeks, thousands of baby spiders crawl out of your eyes. Fell better now?
Comment Written 24-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2019
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Hi Thomas. Good job I?m comfortable with spiders! It?s their sticky webs I have an aversion to! Best wishes, Debra :)
Comment from rama devi
Yucky yicky. It's happened to me too. I noticed they sometimes spin webs across hiking trails from one tree to another. Perhaps the bugs fly in open spaces rather than in the trees? You'd think they'd wise up, so they can avoid the webs getting destroyed.
This is cute...short and to the point. Well timed and rhymed. Well presented. I bet kids would LOVE this a ton.
Hugs, rd
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2019
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Yucky yicky. It's happened to me too. I noticed they sometimes spin webs across hiking trails from one tree to another. Perhaps the bugs fly in open spaces rather than in the trees? You'd think they'd wise up, so they can avoid the webs getting destroyed.
This is cute...short and to the point. Well timed and rhymed. Well presented. I bet kids would LOVE this a ton.
Hugs, rd
Comment Written 24-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2019
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Thank you so much, rd :) I always appreciate hearing form you. Best wishes, Debra :) x
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:-))) xxo
Comment from juliaSjames
I love this teeny tiny rant.
Don't diss spiders. Remember they're preforming a great service by trapping flies etc that can do us harm.
And their webs are works of art.
Some angry spiders are probably venting to their friends about the giant that's going around wrecking their hard work. LOL
Blessings Julia
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2019
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I love this teeny tiny rant.
Don't diss spiders. Remember they're preforming a great service by trapping flies etc that can do us harm.
And their webs are works of art.
Some angry spiders are probably venting to their friends about the giant that's going around wrecking their hard work. LOL
Blessings Julia
Comment Written 24-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2019
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Haha! You?re most probably right, Julia! I actually like spiders, I just don?t like unwittingly walking into their webs!!
Thank you for your lovely feedback. Best wishes, Debra :)
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:))
Comment from patcelaw
It is an awful feeling to walk int the web that a spider has left over night. I enjoyed this short poem. May your week be blessed.
Patricia
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2019
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It is an awful feeling to walk int the web that a spider has left over night. I enjoyed this short poem. May your week be blessed.
Patricia
Comment Written 24-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2019
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Yours too, Patricia :) Thank you for the lovely feedback. Best wishes, Debra
Comment from Bill Pinder
I enjoyed this poem about annoying spiders' webs. The only time they're not annoying is when you don't run into them or not in the house. I think it's a plot to annoy humans!
Bill
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reply by the author on 25-Jun-2019
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I enjoyed this poem about annoying spiders' webs. The only time they're not annoying is when you don't run into them or not in the house. I think it's a plot to annoy humans!
Bill
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Comment Written 24-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2019
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Hi Bill :) If that's their game, they're pretty good at it! Thanks for your feedback. Best wishes as always, Debra
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Good artwork, Debra.
-This sounds like it could
become a children's book
of poems; "Why Do They Do That?"
-We live in a wooded environment,
and have spiders and other
not so wanted insects.
-At least spiders get rid of those.
-I think we don't know because
their webs are not all that visible,
especially outside.
-I'll walk by a tree and
feel the web on my face, too!
-It's not a very good answer,
but it's the only one I've got!
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reply by the author on 25-Jun-2019
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-Good artwork, Debra.
-This sounds like it could
become a children's book
of poems; "Why Do They Do That?"
-We live in a wooded environment,
and have spiders and other
not so wanted insects.
-At least spiders get rid of those.
-I think we don't know because
their webs are not all that visible,
especially outside.
-I'll walk by a tree and
feel the web on my face, too!
-It's not a very good answer,
but it's the only one I've got!
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Comment Written 24-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2019
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Hi Pam :) Thank you for your lovely feedback, and for trying to make sense of why spiders do what they do! Best wishes, Debra :) x
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You are quite welcome, Debra.
