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Viewing comments for Chapter 6 "When Sunrises Cry?"A Book of Horror and Honor.
4 total reviews
Comment from dovemarie
Dear Ricky, Excellent poetry about the sunsets and sunrise. I like your internal rhyming, it reminds me of some of the poems of Jannypan. The yellow wording and black background go perfectly together. And the picture seemed to shine its glow right into my eyes. Dove
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2019
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Dear Ricky, Excellent poetry about the sunsets and sunrise. I like your internal rhyming, it reminds me of some of the poems of Jannypan. The yellow wording and black background go perfectly together. And the picture seemed to shine its glow right into my eyes. Dove
Comment Written 25-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2019
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Impressed.
Many rewards Poet.
Ricky
Comment from Mystic Angel 7777
This is very haunting, Ricky. Your use of vibrant imagery paints a beautifully sad, yet serene, picture in the reader's mind. I really enjoyed reading this. Well done and thank you very much for sharing it.
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2019
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This is very haunting, Ricky. Your use of vibrant imagery paints a beautifully sad, yet serene, picture in the reader's mind. I really enjoyed reading this. Well done and thank you very much for sharing it.
Comment Written 24-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2019
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Always my pleasure Angel.
Rick
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
It is usual to feel some sadness when the sun sets as we say goodbye to another day and the sunrise brings the joy of another day. But of course this is different when you are grieving, because the sunrise brings forth all those feelings of loss when we are awake, I could identify with your words Ricky, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2019
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It is usual to feel some sadness when the sun sets as we say goodbye to another day and the sunrise brings the joy of another day. But of course this is different when you are grieving, because the sunrise brings forth all those feelings of loss when we are awake, I could identify with your words Ricky, love Dolly x
Comment Written 24-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2019
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Rhanks Miss Dolly.
Rick
Comment from babykoala
What a lovely use of language and brilliant imagery! I thoroughly enjoyed reading this and the images it conjured in my minds eye as I read it! Brilliant peice of poetry, well done
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2019
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What a lovely use of language and brilliant imagery! I thoroughly enjoyed reading this and the images it conjured in my minds eye as I read it! Brilliant peice of poetry, well done
Comment Written 24-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2019
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Thanks it's not only nice to have a review but a review from a beautiful woman makes it even better have a wonderful day Dr Ricky 1024
