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Comment from LaFrance
I will step on the bang wagon, confessing my stupidity, just when I think I one up on the smart side. I tumble down the hill to stupidity, when will I figure it out.
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I will step on the bang wagon, confessing my stupidity, just when I think I one up on the smart side. I tumble down the hill to stupidity, when will I figure it out.
Comment Written 25-Jun-2019
Comment from Mystic Angel 7777
M goodness! Such an extensive list of CYA material. I honestly do not see anything that could be considered biased or offensive in your piece. I quite enjoyed it. Conscience is a personal thing and how one chooses to express their own unburdening should not be a matter of what others think whether fictional or not. Nicely done and thank you very much for sharing it.
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M goodness! Such an extensive list of CYA material. I honestly do not see anything that could be considered biased or offensive in your piece. I quite enjoyed it. Conscience is a personal thing and how one chooses to express their own unburdening should not be a matter of what others think whether fictional or not. Nicely done and thank you very much for sharing it.
Comment Written 25-Jun-2019
Comment from Hitcher
A powerful, thought provoking write! the wrong words spoken at the wrong time could send millions to their deaths as could words that are not spoken when they should be heard.
Man has learned how to shape words into weapons and he has became a master assassin. Words, the right words give power to those who wield them, both religious and non religious.
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A powerful, thought provoking write! the wrong words spoken at the wrong time could send millions to their deaths as could words that are not spoken when they should be heard.
Man has learned how to shape words into weapons and he has became a master assassin. Words, the right words give power to those who wield them, both religious and non religious.
Comment Written 25-Jun-2019
Comment from misscookie
I LIKE THE ARTWORK YOU CHOOSE TO GO WITH YOUR WRITE NOT ONLY WAS IS A AN UPLIFTING , POWERFUL WRITE BUT IS WAS A PERFECT MATCH
your YOUR WERE ON POINT FOR SURE
this IS WHAT I CALL A FOOD FOR THOUGHT WRITE
THANK YOU FOR SHARING
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I LIKE THE ARTWORK YOU CHOOSE TO GO WITH YOUR WRITE NOT ONLY WAS IS A AN UPLIFTING , POWERFUL WRITE BUT IS WAS A PERFECT MATCH
your YOUR WERE ON POINT FOR SURE
this IS WHAT I CALL A FOOD FOR THOUGHT WRITE
THANK YOU FOR SHARING
cookie
Comment Written 25-Jun-2019
Comment from Coco Jane
An interesting view of the power of words.
Of course, words can also bring about good. Making man dumb would throw out the proverbial baby with the bath water. Just a thought.
"Haughty, hard, harsh"-- nice alliteration there.
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An interesting view of the power of words.
Of course, words can also bring about good. Making man dumb would throw out the proverbial baby with the bath water. Just a thought.
"Haughty, hard, harsh"-- nice alliteration there.
Comment Written 24-Jun-2019
Comment from Gloria ....
DR Alcreator this is a most interesting write. I like how you've started off with the humility in understanding that pride in intelligence can lead to many haughty acts of violence speaking words and "foolish" opinions that are nothing more than that.
Language can often be the source of great misunderstandings, particularly when we don't listen to others but assume we already know what they think. Lies come much to easily to the human species and add into that deliberate choice to deceive through gossip, rumour and false philosophies and we do have a fine mess.
Humbleness and innocence is a difficult quality to achieve as pride is so prevalent among us.
Great job and much to think about here. :)
Gloria
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DR Alcreator this is a most interesting write. I like how you've started off with the humility in understanding that pride in intelligence can lead to many haughty acts of violence speaking words and "foolish" opinions that are nothing more than that.
Language can often be the source of great misunderstandings, particularly when we don't listen to others but assume we already know what they think. Lies come much to easily to the human species and add into that deliberate choice to deceive through gossip, rumour and false philosophies and we do have a fine mess.
Humbleness and innocence is a difficult quality to achieve as pride is so prevalent among us.
Great job and much to think about here. :)
Gloria
Comment Written 24-Jun-2019
Comment from Darlene BoClair
First I noticed the picture. I prejudged at first site that the prayers for a financial miracle for money to be asked by dumb man. Then I read. Then I read again. In no way would I try to interpret your prayer. I just embrace your writing. Grateful to just take in the moment to give God the glory. Prays never need any further work to be done, let your faith speak for itself.
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First I noticed the picture. I prejudged at first site that the prayers for a financial miracle for money to be asked by dumb man. Then I read. Then I read again. In no way would I try to interpret your prayer. I just embrace your writing. Grateful to just take in the moment to give God the glory. Prays never need any further work to be done, let your faith speak for itself.
Comment Written 24-Jun-2019
Comment from dovemarie
Dear Alcreator, You used fantastic words, amazingly descriptive and challenging, in your poem about "a dumb man." Your repetition was good too, it sounded as though you were making "your first confession ever." Good job! Dove
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Dear Alcreator, You used fantastic words, amazingly descriptive and challenging, in your poem about "a dumb man." Your repetition was good too, it sounded as though you were making "your first confession ever." Good job! Dove
Comment Written 24-Jun-2019
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written faithul piece to plead to be a dumb man before God so that he can have mercy on our souls for all the wrongs we did knowingly and unknowingly, He will forgive us when we have an honest heart when we come to Him.
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A very well-written faithul piece to plead to be a dumb man before God so that he can have mercy on our souls for all the wrongs we did knowingly and unknowingly, He will forgive us when we have an honest heart when we come to Him.
Comment Written 24-Jun-2019
Comment from Ulla
Hi there, this seems to be one long confessional. Something that should be done in quiet. But maybe I'm wrong. I'm not religious, after all. A bit disjointed in places. All best. Ulla:)
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Hi there, this seems to be one long confessional. Something that should be done in quiet. But maybe I'm wrong. I'm not religious, after all. A bit disjointed in places. All best. Ulla:)
Comment Written 24-Jun-2019
