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Comment from joycetreasures
Alcreator Litt Dear,
I really enjoyed this read. It was a huge mouthful. There were so many things you said, we all can relate to. You really have a wonderful way of saying profound things we should also pray for in our lives. This is a wonderful piece for anyone wonder's what they need to pray for in their lives. I like your prayer and appeal to God. You aren't dumb. No, you are smart! This a good piece, really!!! Happy writing. Thanks for sharing. This poem is a keeper.
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Alcreator Litt Dear,
I really enjoyed this read. It was a huge mouthful. There were so many things you said, we all can relate to. You really have a wonderful way of saying profound things we should also pray for in our lives. This is a wonderful piece for anyone wonder's what they need to pray for in their lives. I like your prayer and appeal to God. You aren't dumb. No, you are smart! This a good piece, really!!! Happy writing. Thanks for sharing. This poem is a keeper.
Comment Written 03-Apr-2020
Comment from GE Parson
Dear Mr. Dear,
All those words, comments of many and not a few adjectives, adverbs, nouns and pronouns in, of describing your prayer,
solicitation, confessing your multiple, many, stacked,piled
and pyramided upon each other made me dizzy, light headed,
giddy and vertiginously dazed.
Your friend, fellow poet, acquaintance, and supporter
GE Parson AKA Jerry, Hotrod and Howie
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Dear Mr. Dear,
All those words, comments of many and not a few adjectives, adverbs, nouns and pronouns in, of describing your prayer,
solicitation, confessing your multiple, many, stacked,piled
and pyramided upon each other made me dizzy, light headed,
giddy and vertiginously dazed.
Your friend, fellow poet, acquaintance, and supporter
GE Parson AKA Jerry, Hotrod and Howie
Comment Written 03-Apr-2020
Comment from bhogg
We are all flawed, though we don't normally confess to them so openly as in your post. This was a bit different, but a good, thought provoking read. Regards, Bill
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We are all flawed, though we don't normally confess to them so openly as in your post. This was a bit different, but a good, thought provoking read. Regards, Bill
Comment Written 03-Apr-2020
Comment from dmt1967
I am not used to your proses and found this a good read. I am not very religious but I believe and this sounded like a very good prayer. Thank you for sharing. Take care.
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I am not used to your proses and found this a good read. I am not very religious but I believe and this sounded like a very good prayer. Thank you for sharing. Take care.
Comment Written 02-Jul-2019
Comment from Gail Denham
Would that all dictators and tyrants could be so eager to embrace God and live by His rules - but unfortunately their eyes are blinded by their greed, by their need for power.
Thoughtful story.
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Would that all dictators and tyrants could be so eager to embrace God and live by His rules - but unfortunately their eyes are blinded by their greed, by their need for power.
Thoughtful story.
Comment Written 01-Jul-2019
Comment from Elizabeth Johnson1
Very well done! So much of this is true for so many even though they may not belong to you. There is so much covered in this!
It is certainly true to how people are.
Well done and thanks for sharing
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Very well done! So much of this is true for so many even though they may not belong to you. There is so much covered in this!
It is certainly true to how people are.
Well done and thanks for sharing
Comment Written 29-Jun-2019
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
I doubt anyone reading this poem could, hand on heart, say s/he was not guilty of one or more of these sins. I doubt very much ANYone can. Well done, this is a very well written prayer, although fictional, it is very much non-fiction for most. :) Sandra x
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I doubt anyone reading this poem could, hand on heart, say s/he was not guilty of one or more of these sins. I doubt very much ANYone can. Well done, this is a very well written prayer, although fictional, it is very much non-fiction for most. :) Sandra x
Comment Written 29-Jun-2019
Comment from tfawcus
Although the revelations made in the privacy of the confessional are not for public scrutiny, this fictionalised account describes the kinds of thought that might typically go through the mind of the penitent.
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Although the revelations made in the privacy of the confessional are not for public scrutiny, this fictionalised account describes the kinds of thought that might typically go through the mind of the penitent.
Comment Written 28-Jun-2019
Comment from Tpa
An outstanding philosophical approached to the destruction of mankind. This confession could have been said by any living person, and yet people who carry these devious and vicious still believe that they will spend eternality with God. Nice job.
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An outstanding philosophical approached to the destruction of mankind. This confession could have been said by any living person, and yet people who carry these devious and vicious still believe that they will spend eternality with God. Nice job.
Comment Written 28-Jun-2019
Comment from Earl Corp
This is a mouthful! Confession and prayer go hand in hand. And we all can use some forgiveness for our use of free will. I can see a lot of sins I'm guilt of, and need to ask forgiveness for. Very nice job.
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This is a mouthful! Confession and prayer go hand in hand. And we all can use some forgiveness for our use of free will. I can see a lot of sins I'm guilt of, and need to ask forgiveness for. Very nice job.
Comment Written 28-Jun-2019
