Stair Down
A story of the medicine in music3 total reviews
Comment from lyenochka
Wow! Great job in sneaking in your violin and playing that song that I'm sure touched your uncle's spirit. Thanking the Lord, for his entering into remission! Thanks for sharing this great story.
One suggestion:
" so I brain stormed " (brainstormed) one word.
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2019
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Wow! Great job in sneaking in your violin and playing that song that I'm sure touched your uncle's spirit. Thanking the Lord, for his entering into remission! Thanks for sharing this great story.
One suggestion:
" so I brain stormed " (brainstormed) one word.
Comment Written 25-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2019
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Thank You so much for Ivenochka for your kind review and suggestion. Have a great day.
Comment from LisaMay
Stair Down is a great title for your cool story. Your musical ability and thoughtfulness and Jimmy Page's riffs all worked together to chase death away for a while and provide the elements for your well written story, appealing in its laid-back and humorous approach.
Something to correct:
lightening - should be spelled lightning (lightening means it is turning more pale, going whiter.)
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2019
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Stair Down is a great title for your cool story. Your musical ability and thoughtfulness and Jimmy Page's riffs all worked together to chase death away for a while and provide the elements for your well written story, appealing in its laid-back and humorous approach.
Something to correct:
lightening - should be spelled lightning (lightening means it is turning more pale, going whiter.)
Comment Written 24-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2019
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Thank you so, so much Lisa for your kind review and also for catching the lightning mistake. Have a great one.
Comment from AdaJulie
Very nice job with this, it is beautifully expressed in few words. Well done, very well done. I especially love the colorful art you put to accent your work, There is much passion in all that you create. This is was included in your good works.
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2019
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Very nice job with this, it is beautifully expressed in few words. Well done, very well done. I especially love the colorful art you put to accent your work, There is much passion in all that you create. This is was included in your good works.
Comment Written 24-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2019
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Thanks so, so much Ada for your kind and generous review. Have a great one.
